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Voices Are Swords

She was up all night, hearing his voice Echo—choice Which prevents her from falling asleep Echo—weep I lack to portray the agony of the globe Echo—strobe With lines that will echo through the ages Echo—sages Listen to my cries and catch the sonic boom Echo—gloom. How would their voices echo off the walls? Echo—calls When I cut myself, I don't lack a bandage Echo—language I need someone to tell me it will all be fine Echo—shine Footprints disappear with lunar winds Echo—minds Still, there will always be a footstep echo Echo—sorrow Hiding in the host's accumulated dirt Echo—hurt. Man's restless soul is utterly a shadow Echo—meadow Don't just repeat what other birds sing Echo—bring Don't just echo what other people say Echo—today You're special, say and do what you want Echo—haunt If you're convincing, your words will matter Echo—better
Written: February 11, 2023 ECHO VERSE: Echo verse has a pretty simple rule: Repeat the end syllable(s) of each line. No other rules.
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Goldsmith Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 11:29 AM
WOW!!! What an amazing write. Love The Ending. So True. Have a blessed day......................
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 11:16 AM
I have to say Lasaad you can turn your hand to every known form of poetry, and make it seem effortless, I enjoyed reading your Echoes today, excellent work, cheers David
Dietrich Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 9:58 AM
oh wow, what an interesting style and to choose it for the ECho word. Clever.
Buehler Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 9:20 AM
Your echo poem is masterfully crafted, my friend. I enjoyed reading this beautiful new poetry form. :)
Pandit Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 5:54 AM
Your creativity and poetic passions echo throughout my friend. Well done.
Kendrick Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 3:44 AM
I like the way you went with this form. I tried it several ways myself a few weeks ago. They are not easy to write and really say anything with them. I really like the snapshot with the close-up of raindrops or dewdrops or just water droplets. If you look closely at water droplets on a plant it is a very tiny mirror reflecting things around it. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 1:31 AM
At first I thought this was a Constance poem, but I was wrong. You have invented a new format. Very clever.
Kendrick Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 3:43 AM
No exactly a new format. I found this echo verse form online and I tried to write a couple of them a few weeks ago or maybe a month ago. LOL...Sara
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