Get Your Premium Membership

Voices

Sitting here under an old shady tree I heard voices of school children from afar; Though vague in the distance it left me reminiscing memories of long ago. Ah, our voices when we were young and oh, so true! Untiringly climbing mountain dancing and singing in the rain. We built and shouted our dreams of who we will be decades from then, Until our voices echoed in the cliffs; And thousand times returned to us. Now, here under the old shady tree, I mumble, "oh, childhood, where art thou? " And as the voices vanish, I hear birds chirping in unison. May 30, 2020 Entered for “What Brings You Peace Poetry Contest” Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/23/2021 5:56:00 PM
A delightful write, JC! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Login to Reply
Date: 6/8/2020 8:54:00 PM
Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/3/2020 10:11:00 PM
Those voices are memorable, indeed. Just something so uplifting in their timbre. Cheers and Congrats, Gershon
Login to Reply
Date: 5/31/2020 9:04:00 AM
I was walking on the beach recently and in that moment felt transported back to my childhood. I enjoyed your poem. ;0)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/31/2020 6:46:00 AM
I feel the same sometimes, I can sit somewhere and it takes me away to my childhood... When we are young life seems to move so slow, but as we get older its so much faster and we wonder where the years are gone.. Always love reading your poetry..
Login to Reply
Date: 5/31/2020 6:15:00 AM
The voices of time...each into the future...Well expressed
Login to Reply
Date: 5/31/2020 5:36:00 AM
I am glad to see you back, and I so missed reading your beautiful poetry. As we echo through our lives, sometimes our dreams even wane.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/30/2020 10:55:00 PM
This poetic gem, speaks for so many of us. Childhood if happy by far the best time of all.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/30/2020 3:31:00 PM
"Oh, childhood, where art thou?" is perhaps the most repeated question ever! When young, time has no meaning; once we grow older we wonder where the years have gone to! If we are careful, we should be able to carry those memories with us forever more. ~ Regards // paul
Login to Reply
Date: 5/30/2020 1:31:00 PM
Indeed we let the voices and memories of childhood vanish oonly to find the birds chirping and reliving them. I wish we could live those days again. Beautifully penned :)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/30/2020 6:22:00 AM
So succinctly and wonderfully done, JCB; Loved this awesome stanza:We built and shouted our dreams of who we will be decades from then, Until our voices echoed in the cliffs; And thousand times returned to us.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs