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August.11.2023
Writing Challenge U or V Words poetry Contest
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"While many are silenced by authority, some are voiceless as they have no courage to protest. But some prefer voicelessness for convenience sake which is a graver offence" ~ By Poet
In a world of much noise and cacophony Some are fated to remain voiceless, Due to reasons forced or voluntary. Raising no protest, they yield to their fate Watch the meek docile lambs that move, Behind the shepherd to be huddled inside Food and shelter are all they need, And they abide to be shorn with no dissent. Silent are the beasts that trot along, Miles on end through rugged tracks. Blissfully ignorant of what awaits, They stagger lamely to the slaughterhouse. Mournful is the voicelessness of the slaves, Flogged and beaten to bear the yoke, Stifled is the cry within their throats, Never once let out to break the calm Heart rending is the voicelessness of the dumb, Trying in vain to utter fleeting thoughts, Through signs and gestures crude to view, Lisping and blabbering in broken sounds. Fierce is the silence that lingers on, The ones subdued under stark threat of life, Gagged and tied unable to moan or move, While looted of all that is hoarded in life. Silence turns golden for the sober man, Who remains sedate when taunted or abused And shuts his mouth with great restraint, To prevent a brawl from brewing up Voiceless lies the dead beneath the sod, Actors who once rocked the stage, They exited out from this turbulent world, To be shrouded within crevices dark.

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Date: 8/16/2023 10:55:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs
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Date: 8/15/2023 10:48:00 AM
Dearest Valsa, this is an amazing poem with your signature stunning imagery as you spin and explore this theme of the "voiceless" in so many scenes from slaves, to the poor, to lambs to slaughter to death silenced rock stars. Your poetic talent is on full display my friend. Masterfully written! Blessings to you dear friend!
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Date: 8/15/2023 1:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. An interesting choice of v word also. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 8/14/2023 10:27:00 AM
So many are voiceless because of their station in life, Congrts on your win Valsa
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Date: 8/14/2023 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Voiceless" has a voice. Have a great day.............
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Date: 8/13/2023 2:38:00 PM
Great V word and topic to choose, Valsa, and congrats for your awesome win.
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Date: 8/13/2023 3:42:00 AM
A great voice for the voiceless:)
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Date: 8/12/2023 8:32:00 PM
A time to speak up; a time to be silent. Knowing when to do which is the trick. Much 'food for thought' here, Valsa. Thank you, Gershon
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Date: 8/12/2023 2:51:00 PM
a powerful poem, there are so many silent people, no one listen to, thanks for the moving poem
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Date: 8/11/2023 10:57:00 PM
This is very powerful Valsa, it hit a chord too as I avoid the news and political world because I feel powerless but actually I should do more. Even local protests when I've got involved I can clearly help but I run out of energy. I try never to be a bystander though when I can help in person x
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Date: 8/11/2023 8:22:00 PM
This is is such a powerful poem, and lends a voice to those who are silenced. After I am done writing this, I will pray for them. We need a reminder, and you have done well to do so. The brutal beasts will one day be silenced, the meek and the poor will be justified when we meet our maker. This world has so much that is cruel and so unfair. Thank you, my friend, you wield a mighty and beautiful pen.
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Date: 8/11/2023 8:23:00 PM
A fave for me by the way. God bless you Valsa <3
Date: 8/11/2023 3:41:00 PM
This would not leave my mind, I had to come back and read it again. Having a voice and using it is essential to have the feeling of purpose in life. IMHO This will be a FAV for my list, my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 8/11/2023 3:13:00 PM
I liked this. I try to think of us poets using poetry as our voice. :) Very true and ringing!
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Date: 8/11/2023 2:59:00 PM
Loved your personal quote, Valsa. This is a fine entry for the contest, my friend. It is a power poem, filled with wisdom. My favorite verse is, "Silence turns golden for the sober man, Who remains sedate when taunted or abused And shuts his mouth with great restraint, To prevent a brawl from brewing up It takes a wise and strong man or woman to exercise restraint for the good of the whole. Blessing my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 8/11/2023 11:33:00 AM
- A powerful meaningful poem ... you give voice to the voiceless - Best wishes in the contest, Valsa :) - hugs
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Date: 8/11/2023 11:14:00 AM
Truly, exquisitely crafted. Your verses possess profound depth and a harmonious cadence that is nothing short of splendid! I am confident that this literary masterpiece will ascend to great heights. Wishing you the utmost success, dear Valsa!
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Date: 8/11/2023 10:06:00 AM
Love your wisdom and knowledge of your writings , to share unto a much needed world : )
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Date: 8/11/2023 9:52:00 AM
Nice rendering of voiceless people and animals. Being voiceless merely enslaves one to the masters with loud voice or deeds.
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