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I take off my gloves, for I am warm All the while maintaining perfect form Appearances important, shop floor sheen Demonstrating interest, showing I'm keen But I'd love to just sit and stare Just for a moment, forget I'm there Not talk about meal prep or getting out stains Not stand up for hours ignoring ankle pains Not dressing for fashion, but dressing for me Forgetting expectations, just letting things be I dare not slouch or skip nightly cold cream Nothing is too much, I hold in the scream Polite conversation, I'm worn out already Rely on lipstick and blush to disguise I'm unsteady Moments to go and this journey is done I breathe, stay focussed as worker, wife and mum I have all the mod cons to make easy living But I still just feel all the time that I'm giving I'm grateful of course, we're living the dream Appearances are not always what they seem Picture 3 29th August 2023

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Date: 9/25/2023 11:52:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful winning poem, D.D. :) - hugs
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Date: 9/25/2023 12:12:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise - your supportive comments are a wonderful element of poetry soup x
Date: 9/24/2023 9:21:00 PM
An excellent Poem D. I can feel her tension as I read, being reminded of the era by your timely banter in keeping with the period in which your poem and the picture were set. Well done.
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Date: 9/24/2023 10:23:00 PM
Thanks SV - these eras are completely fascinating :)
Date: 9/24/2023 8:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. How you show how proper one has to be, but just love to be yourself.
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Date: 9/24/2023 10:21:00 PM
Many thanks Eve, I enjoyed the contest x
Date: 8/29/2023 2:20:00 AM
"Appearance are not always what they seem" That's so true.. This is such a wonderfully crafted write with delicate descriptions, flowing seamlessly throughout with deep emotions..
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Date: 8/29/2023 2:32:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, I appreciate your feedback x
Date: 8/29/2023 12:11:00 AM
Wonderful. I love it and I'm sure Eve will too. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 8/29/2023 12:21:00 AM
Thank you Gina, I appreciate your kindness x

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