Voice of Truth

Ocean waves cry out,
From the center of the sea:
With faith to reach land.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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La France Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 9:51 AM
This is a beautiful haiku, Raul, so visual...I am sending you a soup mail in a moment~~
Crane Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 4:06 PM
this speaks on some high volume man , i really dig this haiku ..so much meaning behind this one .. amazing poet you are :) . Marco
Lacey Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 2:40 PM
Good definition of where to find God!!
Peranteau Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 3:40 PM
Raul,..I just love this Haiku ! Wonderful, wonderful my poetic friend ! james
Riley Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 8:24 AM
You put me in the moment with this Haiku. Excellent! Thanks for third place in your contest. It meant a lot to me. Terry
Loveless Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 6:04 PM
beautiful. i truly love this. touching.
Fraser Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 2:26 AM
Another touching write in few words on the marvels in nature, sheer class Raul>>James
Null Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 6:16 PM
So little says so much, excellent.....KARLA
Gorelick Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 1:19 PM
You touch my heart with these little writes. Love you..Barbara
Pickett Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 10:16 AM
And I will be there to ride them as they make thier way to land....Wonderful Haiku friend......:JP)
K. Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 9:36 AM
a haiku with such a powerful message! Very nicely written :)
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July 25, 2009 at 8:20 AM
Blessings to you for sharing this inspirational poem with us. Keep that faith! Nice use of imagery and personification. Have a good day. Karen
Johnson Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 8:15 AM
Thank you Raoul. This Haiku is masterful. Love, Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 7:08 AM
Lovely haiku, Raul, rich with imagery as well as faith. Love, Carolyn
Winter Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 5:55 AM
I see Raul your Haiku only continue to get better. This is incredible and it is so great to read you again! Well, WOW - a big, huge thank you for that completely surprising win in your contest!! I truly struggled with it (as you may have noticed) and never thought I'd even place! You have so encouraged me, you have no idea! Moving is a drag and I miss everyone here so much. You have put me on cloud 9 and made me feel still connected, which is so important to me. Warmest thanks & hugs, Shar xoxo
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 5:08 AM
Love it. Sara
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July 25, 2009 at 3:41 AM
lets be like the ocean waves reaching land through faith friendship and love--voice of truth...Well penned my friend --and thought i share this with you,there is an Amber eleven year old girl here on site who wrote one of the deepest haiku ever ,she said her uncle is a poet here,i thought it could be you or your friendRuben- her uncle/ cos you are the two Haiku mater's anyway, if its you well done,if it isnt,give her a hand- she s worth to be a queen of Haikus in the future-excellent write Raul
Kelly Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 2:14 AM
As sure as the daily tides , Raul . Good call in perfect format ....
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