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Voice of Truth

Ocean waves cry out, From the center of the sea: With faith to reach land.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 9/2/2011 9:51:00 AM
This is a beautiful haiku, Raul, so visual...I am sending you a soup mail in a moment~~
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Date: 9/22/2009 4:06:00 PM
this speaks on some high volume man , i really dig this haiku much meaning behind this one .. amazing poet you are :) . Marco
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Date: 8/5/2009 2:40:00 PM
Good definition of where to find God!!
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Date: 7/31/2009 3:40:00 PM
Raul,..I just love this Haiku ! Wonderful, wonderful my poetic friend ! james
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Date: 7/31/2009 8:24:00 AM
You put me in the moment with this Haiku. Excellent! Thanks for third place in your contest. It meant a lot to me. Terry
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Date: 7/27/2009 6:04:00 PM
beautiful. i truly love this. touching.
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Date: 7/27/2009 2:26:00 AM
Another touching write in few words on the marvels in nature, sheer class Raul>>James
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Date: 7/25/2009 6:16:00 PM
So little says so much, excellent.....KARLA
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Date: 7/25/2009 1:19:00 PM
You touch my heart with these little writes. Love you..Barbara
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Date: 7/25/2009 10:16:00 AM
And I will be there to ride them as they make thier way to land....Wonderful Haiku friend......:JP)
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Date: 7/25/2009 9:36:00 AM
a haiku with such a powerful message! Very nicely written :)
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Date: 7/25/2009 8:20:00 AM
Blessings to you for sharing this inspirational poem with us. Keep that faith! Nice use of imagery and personification. Have a good day. Karen
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Date: 7/25/2009 8:15:00 AM
Thank you Raoul. This Haiku is masterful. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/25/2009 7:08:00 AM
Lovely haiku, Raul, rich with imagery as well as faith. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/25/2009 5:55:00 AM
I see Raul your Haiku only continue to get better. This is incredible and it is so great to read you again! Well, WOW - a big, huge thank you for that completely surprising win in your contest!! I truly struggled with it (as you may have noticed) and never thought I'd even place! You have so encouraged me, you have no idea! Moving is a drag and I miss everyone here so much. You have put me on cloud 9 and made me feel still connected, which is so important to me. Warmest thanks & hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 7/25/2009 5:08:00 AM
Love it. Sara
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Date: 7/25/2009 3:41:00 AM
lets be like the ocean waves reaching land through faith friendship and love--voice of truth...Well penned my friend --and thought i share this with you,there is an Amber eleven year old girl here on site who wrote one of the deepest haiku ever ,she said her uncle is a poet here,i thought it could be you or your friendRuben- her uncle/ cos you are the two Haiku mater's anyway, if its you well done,if it isnt,give her a hand- she s worth to be a queen of Haikus in the future-excellent write Raul
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Date: 7/25/2009 2:14:00 AM
As sure as the daily tides , Raul . Good call in perfect format ....
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