Voice of the Last Acorn

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Vijay Pandit.


Image credit: Wikipedia

Image credit: Wikipedia


People amble by in view of the placid lake
Mesmerized by horizon adorning scarlet
While not far from the Oak tree, I stealthily lay
Enthralled in musical repertoire of Blue Jays
As squirrels run wild in a purposeful race
And searching for food woodpeckers peck.

Trust me when I say they are no friends--
One by one they devoured my mates
And now here I am, the only one left--
Thanks to the kid who curiously picked me
And threw me away in callous disdain
Landing in a pit just a few yards from the lake
Still within grace of the golden daybreak.

My endurance burned in hot summer days
And resilience ached in stormy, rainy haze
Till cooler nights met dewy vibrant dawns
As resplendent vistas autumn witnessed
And falling colors floated in evening breeze
Burying me in cloak of fiery-red leaves
For semblance of warmth in winter forlorn.

In misery of wet, cold my core utterly soaked
As I almost lost hope of sanguine heart echoes
Until aura of life the young spring invoked
When my roots formed, sprouting new growth
And slowly I up-rose in a delightful world
Marveling rising skies of ruby brushstrokes.

April 24, 2020
HM: Strand Pick H Contest
The last acorn poetry contest
Sponsor: John Lawless

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/23/2023 9:49:00 AM
Wonderful writ Vijay, I especially liked the third stanza..
Login to Reply
Date: 10/9/2020 4:29:00 PM
Now when I see a squirrel gathering acorns, I will remember your wonderful poem :) ~Angie
Login to Reply
Date: 5/12/2020 2:28:00 PM
"And falling colors floated in evening breeze, Burying me in cloak of fiery-red leaves"...must say the thoughts picture the beauty of a wandering mind at dusk beautifully. :)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/12/2020 1:14:00 PM
Hello Vijay Pandit, so the acorn ended up to grow into a tree. I am happy to read this ending. Enjo your day my friend.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/11/2020 6:14:00 PM
I. love it. Good job. Beau travail.
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2020 7:34:00 AM
Many thanks. Much appreciate.
Date: 5/5/2020 5:42:00 PM
Littered with poignant images in a story of endurance against the harsh elements ... this contest sure did inspire you it seems! "ruby brushstrokes" and "golden daybreak" some of my favorite moments in the poem. I've read quite a few good ones in this contest, but it's no doubt you have a great contender here.
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/6/2020 2:29:00 PM
I am delighted by your visit and comments Tim--much appreciate --many thanks.
Date: 5/2/2020 1:36:00 PM
Striking and beautiful narrative, personification and imagery, Vijay. The resilience of the last acorn is to be admired and copied. ~Regards // paul
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/2/2020 1:41:00 PM
Much appreciate Paul--many thanks.
Date: 5/1/2020 10:28:00 AM
Vijay, congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest _ Constance
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/1/2020 12:33:00 PM
Much appreciate, Constance--many thanks.
Date: 4/30/2020 11:04:00 PM
Every emotion evoked in this poetic story of life emerging, Vijay. Really lovely work with your always vibrant imagery! Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/1/2020 12:32:00 PM
Thank you Sam--much appreciate.
Date: 4/27/2020 4:37:00 PM
hey, I see Connie faved it too. I hope it climbs onto the best poems list for the month!
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/28/2020 8:23:00 AM
Much appreciate Andrea your return visit--many thanks.
Date: 4/27/2020 12:44:00 AM
Wow, Vijay absolutely stunning poetry..Stay Safe, My friend..Harry
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/27/2020 7:19:00 AM
So kind of you Harry--much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 4/26/2020 7:33:00 PM
I don't know how anyone could write a more lovely poem than this one Vijay! I am blown away! Your personification of the last acorn glows with emotion and makes one aware that life is honored in plant life with a sentient spirit of God's creation and how miraculous it is. I am putting this into my Faves. What a wonderful poet you are! Blessings Connie xxoo
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/27/2020 7:18:00 AM
That is such a nice feedback to read my friend--especially from a gifted writer that you are. Much appreciate Connie--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 4/25/2020 8:21:00 PM
omg, Vijay. BEST one I have seen in the contest. FAVE.
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/26/2020 7:03:00 AM
That is so special, coming from a TOP poetess on Soup. Much appreciate the kind remarks, Andrea. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 4/25/2020 4:37:00 PM
Wow Vijay. This poem is amazing. Interesting, I saw piles of acorns in my yard today. You have written this so well. A Fav :)
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/26/2020 7:00:00 AM
So very kind of you my friend. Glad you are feeling better. Much appreciate, as always--many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 4/25/2020 3:50:00 PM
fabulous personification Vijay!!:-) I especially like the final stanza and your wonderful imagery:) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/26/2020 6:59:00 AM
Honored by your visit and kind remarks, Jan. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 4/25/2020 11:45:00 AM
I have fallen in love with world little acorn! Beautifully written.
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2020 3:14:00 PM
So nice to hear from a gifted writer. Much appreciate your visit and comments Lonna--many thanks.
Date: 4/25/2020 11:07:00 AM
Wonderful again.. No better personification I couldn't find.. Great write Vijay.. Good luck..
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2020 3:13:00 PM
Much appreciate Jenish--many thanks.
Date: 4/25/2020 10:33:00 AM
This personification poem is one of the cutest, sweetest poems I have ever read, beside your amazing craftsmanship which brought this talented write together - a certain win my friend. Blessings and safe thoughts from across the pond, Blessings, Jennifer.
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2020 3:12:00 PM
Always a pleasure to read your kind words, Jennifer. Much appreciate--many thanks. Stay safe my friend.
Date: 4/25/2020 7:22:00 AM
Each time you write on nature matters my friend, Vijay, is like composing a symphony of beauty comparable to that of Mozart or of Beethoven! Great imagery displayed in great verses. Good luck my friend. Stay healthy.
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2020 9:22:00 AM
What a wonderful comment from a renowned poet. Much appreciate my friend..many thanks.
Date: 4/25/2020 6:17:00 AM
Great write, Vijay, very creative; one of your finest, my friend.
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2020 9:21:00 AM
That is so very kind. Much appreciate Lawrence--many thanks. Hope all is well--looking forward to your poems soon.
Date: 4/25/2020 4:05:00 AM
Such a beautiful story of regeneration and the miracle of nature, Vijay: Your words are flowing on a beautiful theme. So good to read you today. Hugs, SuZ
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2020 9:20:00 AM
Haven't seen your poems lately, SuZ. So glad to hear from you. Much appreciate..many thanks.
Date: 4/24/2020 9:33:00 PM
Yes!! There is always hope, even for one as simple as the acorn. It is the circle of life. Your thoughts take me there in the moment. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. ~ Brandy
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2020 9:19:00 AM
So very kind of you my friend. Much appreciate Brandy--many thanks.
Date: 4/24/2020 6:07:00 PM
Inspirational story with vivid description, Vijay. Janice
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2020 9:18:00 AM
Thank you Janice--much appreciate.
Date: 4/24/2020 4:46:00 PM
Loved your story of the humble acorn Vijay, when all hope was lost nature took over and gave new life and over time become a majestic Oak. Good luck. Stay safe Tom
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2020 9:18:00 AM
Much appreciate Tom--many thanks. Yes--we are all being careful...you do the same.
Date: 4/24/2020 4:21:00 PM
such vivid imagery... love the story told within... as an acorn you sprouted beautifully as a poem, your words are equally beautiful Vijay... best wishes in the contest...i can see this one on top! Gorgeous write :) hugs
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2020 9:17:00 AM
Thank you my friend for your kind feedback. Much appreciate, Sandy--many thanks.
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter