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November 27, 2022
Placed 1st: Poetry is a life-cherishing standard contest
Sponsor: Sotto Poet


 

Adorable, enticing as beauteous glance, Engaging, evocative as a ballet dance Luring passions flaunting moody stance; Poetry is music strumming from heart, Lyrics of life emblazoned in poetic art. It’s a smile of Venus on moonless night, Ruby rose abloom midst wintry plight; Verses of harmony embossed in rhyme Of wisdom, witty words, eternal as time, Expressions of mind streaming sublime. Poetry is nourishment to vacuous soul, Meaningful words inner voices extoll, Metaphors, simile, elusive moods cajole; Musings inimitable~ we cannot clone, Neither can we cage, nor can we own. Endearing, amiable~ it’s ballad of love, Pure, passionate, as cooing of a dove; A lighthouse guiding ships through dark, On vacant thoughts, enlightened spark, Charming dismal morn, a song of lark.

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Date: 3/28/2024 12:02:00 PM
This is so deeply meaningful and i think many can resonate too with your words woven with such captivatinv rhymes in cadence. Poetry, is nourishment, i agree, and i love so many lines in this especially “ It’s a smile of Venus on moonless night, Ruby rose abloom midst wintry plight; Verses of harmony embossed in rhyme Of wisdom, witty words, eternal as time,” so profound with brilliant word choices and alliterations and depth to the way youv expressed! A fave it is for me! I love your poems
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Date: 1/24/2023 2:39:00 PM
Trembling with beauty, such a brilliant poem, a vision and a muse - singing to the heart, warming the spirit. So tranquil, so gentle, silent and wistful - Love this so. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 1/21/2023 1:51:00 AM
Congratulations, Vijay on your poem placed First of the top 100 poems' list!
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Date: 1/18/2023 10:32:00 PM
So many great lines in this beauty. the definition of what poetry truly is. " Versus of harmony embossed in rhyme" probably my favorite line. Much love Asavvy1
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Date: 1/17/2023 11:08:00 AM
Hello Vijay I read your great Voice of Poetry just now. Pure passionate as cooing of A dove. Good line. A great Rhyme congratulations on Your POTD. VB Rogers Black panther
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Date: 1/17/2023 4:38:00 AM
Congratulations on having written a potd, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2023 6:38:00 AM
Glad to see you again, Jenna. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks for stopping by. I don't believe this was POTD.
Date: 1/17/2023 3:30:00 AM
This flowing and compelling read is a quite exquisite homage to poetry. It will reach the heart of every reader, as it has mine.
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Date: 1/17/2023 6:32:00 AM
So very kind of you to say so, Peter. Many thanks for visiting and commenting. Much appreciate your presence on my page.
Date: 1/16/2023 2:39:00 AM
I love how you've filled the poem with beautiful words. Very artfully done. I enjoyed reading it
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Date: 1/17/2023 6:31:00 AM
So nice to hear that Bernadette. Glad to meet you in this space. Enjoyed reading your poem recently. Many thanks.
Date: 1/14/2023 8:58:00 PM
So very much imagery Vijay! Wow! From passions to planets you have packed this one.
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Date: 1/17/2023 6:30:00 AM
Glad you liked the poem, FJ. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Date: 12/29/2022 9:08:00 PM
It's powerful. I liked it. May the New Year bless you with health, wealth, and happiness Vijay
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Date: 1/17/2023 6:29:00 AM
Happy New Year to you as well. Many thanks for stopping by with your kind remarks. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 12/28/2022 8:31:00 PM
about as poetic as one can create....so many enchanting lines...."It’s a smile of Venus on moonless night" oh that does capture the soul of poetry....absolutely loved it
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Date: 1/17/2023 6:28:00 AM
So very kind of you to say so, Timothy. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 12/25/2022 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love your line, "Meaningful words inner voices extoll." Have a blessed day................
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Date: 1/17/2023 6:27:00 AM
Thank you Paula. Much appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 12/21/2022 1:23:00 AM
Vijay I see you were guided im this fluid write Let alone others.' I rate this one of the best Pieces I have read; ever.! I can see the varied People commenting also, not like you normally See' as in a more static grouping.' All the best to You for this season, and over Christmas.'
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Date: 1/17/2023 6:26:00 AM
So nice to hear that, Joe. You are very kind to offer such glowing feedback. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Date: 12/20/2022 3:07:00 PM
This is so smoothly beautiful; an excellent pen, very enjoyable.
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Date: 1/17/2023 6:25:00 AM
Appreciate your visit MLK. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
Date: 12/17/2022 6:58:00 AM
How beautifully stated Vijay! Debx
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Date: 1/17/2023 6:24:00 AM
Thank you Deb. Much appreciate.
Date: 12/14/2022 2:20:00 AM
Your winged words leap from the page into minds inspiring mood and awe! Love this! Congrats.
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Date: 12/16/2022 1:07:00 PM
Much appreciate your kind remarks, Karen. Many thanks.
Date: 12/11/2022 6:38:00 AM
An enlightened spark to this one's soul with this gem, Vijay. Simply beautiful and brilliantly written. Very Nice! Charlie
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Date: 12/16/2022 1:07:00 PM
Thank you Charlie--much appreciate your visit and kind feedback.
Date: 12/9/2022 7:19:00 PM
Vijay, I especially love your ‘poetry as a lighthouse guiding vacant thoughts’ but this is quite a tour de force, a glorious outline of the Art form we keep dreaming to master haha well, we can try… super penning here…. Blessings, sally
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Date: 12/16/2022 1:06:00 PM
You are so very kind. Thank you Sally. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 12/8/2022 3:16:00 PM
I knew this would be a winner from the very start Vijay, congrats on your win
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/9/2022 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Vienna. Much appreciate.
Date: 12/7/2022 1:16:00 PM
Wonderful job, Vijay, and big congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/9/2022 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. Much appreciate.
Date: 12/7/2022 6:50:00 AM
Emotive and endearing Vijay. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 12/7/2022 11:01:00 AM
Thank you Linda.
Date: 12/6/2022 8:37:00 AM
Vijay, your metaphors are so descriptive--amazing. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 12/7/2022 11:01:00 AM
Thank you Janice.
Date: 12/6/2022 8:37:00 AM
Vijay, your metaphors are so descriptive--amazing. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 12/4/2022 11:24:00 AM
Love the rhymes and flow..You describe what poetry means to you and many others so well...so many great verses in this..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/7/2022 11:00:00 AM
Thank you SO--much appreciate.
Date: 12/4/2022 9:31:00 AM
Vijay, Your depth of heart and intellect pulsates with life here. You are able to see and feel inside the human spirit and mind. Your words are gifts to all of us. Your elegance received with much appreciation. Congratulations on your fist place win! Hugs and blessings to you and yours, Susan :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/7/2022 11:00:00 AM
So very kind of you Susan. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks, my friend.
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