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They sit at the red Formica table, quietly buttering their morning toast, while watching her through the window glass. It is as much a daily routine, as brushing their teeth. How disappointed they would be, if she did not arrive on time. They could even set their clocks by her comings and going each day, quietly observing her through the kitchen window, as she comes out from behind the tool shed. She will stop, look around, then carefully lumber along beneath the hedge row. Her fine snout aimed in one direction, her eyes squinted down against the rude, gray light, while her body seems to announce...."possum, possum",....as she rocks across the backyard, then slowly meandering over to the northwest corner of the fence, to disappear again, into the weeds of the vacant lot, that lies on the other side. Sipping their coffee, they have remained quietly pensive for a few moments, then once again they will remind each other that they must take care not to mend the gap in the old cedar-wood fence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/2/2010 2:56:00 PM
Always a pleasure reading your work. Vince
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Date: 3/2/2010 1:27:00 PM
Hey Carrie, Congratulations on your win in the contest! I've asked Audrey to post this comment on my behalf. ...Jimmy
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Date: 3/1/2010 5:27:00 PM
Dear Carrie, my congratulations on your win in the contest! Great write! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 3/1/2010 10:18:00 AM
That's sweet, Carrie. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/1/2010 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ARPoet's "Act One Scene One" Contest ~Carrie~. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2010 5:43:00 AM
How charming, lovely to read - well done in the competition
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Date: 3/1/2010 12:39:00 AM
It is time for the final curtain call and you are standing tall on stage! Congratulations Carrie, for your win in the Rambling Poet’s “Act I, Scene I” poetry contest. Enjoy the limelight! You deserve it. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/1/2010 12:38:00 AM
It is time for the final curtain call and you are standing tall on stage! Congratulations Carie, for your win in the Rambling Poet’s “Act I, Scene I” poetry contest. Enjoy the limelight! You deserve it. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/28/2010 10:02:00 PM
Wonderful that you won Carrie. Congratulations to you. Love, Connie
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Date: 2/28/2010 8:39:00 PM
Wow! Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest. See you backstage!!! :)Love, Iolanda
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Date: 2/28/2010 7:05:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your third place win in Constance's contest.. a wonderful write and a win to enjoy.. so enjoy .. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 2/28/2010 5:19:00 PM
Congratulations on a third place win in my contest with this wonderful poem...
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Date: 2/7/2010 11:16:00 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/7/2010 12:02:00 PM
This scene is suspenseful and carefully staged, great write---Richard J
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Date: 2/6/2010 4:56:00 PM
carrie, I like this. I really have no clue how to attempt this contest. I was imagining doing dialoge, but I don't guess it would be prose, but rather a script!! yes, the BEatles were prodigies!! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/6/2010 5:23:00 AM
Im enjoying the scene Carrie,indeed..Best wishes my dear friend..Charma
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Date: 2/6/2010 2:02:00 AM
Best wishes in the contest Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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