Visitor - Part 2 - A collaboration with July Morning

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The Story so far continued from 'Visitor'…
An attractive extra-terrestrial female researcher sent to a remote island to observe earth and beam back her findings is struggling with unfamiliar, alien romantic emotions. Even though she is forbidden to make human contact she revives a human male whose life is ebbing away when he is washed ashore.

Earth observatory dispatched a small boat fitted out with equipment and a researcher to investigate the unusual signal activity monitored to be emanating from remote island atolls. Disaster struck when his boat and equipment was smashed on the rocks during a storm. In a dream like state he is aware of his saviour, but has not managed to see her as she stays concealed in the bushes.   
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Oh Earthling my thoughts are awry my mind in confusion Does this condition have a name? Is this what you call love? An all-encompassing love that conquers all obstacles Power to blatantly surmount a disregarded decree from above? How will they assess my accelerating heartbeat when you I envision? Decrypt - Encrypt- Sentiments Decode - Unravel thoughts of my nocturnal dreams? Decipher inflamed passions awakened at sunrise to ardent thoughts present at dusk? Snared in amatory chains am I - powerless to resist destiny’s reticent schemes How must I profess my inmost secrets to you? In phrases of verse? You are an enigma yet my heart thrills savouring sweet bliss Planets aligned the time our energies entwined in my ‘breath of life’ * ‘I can express no kinder sign of love than in this kind kiss’ See through my eyes my planet of shimmering moonbeams Our Shangrila of luxuriant pristine forests will induce a sweet sigh The alluring beauty and aroma of our flora will render you breathless Cruising our world on the backs of majestic avian we could fly I have prolonged my mission’s stay far too long already A perplexing dilemma I encounter should I go or stay In a deep seemingly bottomless chasm of uncertainty I swim Wistful thoughts of you returning with me - my one hopeful ray Natheless a decisive dynamic prompts me to unlock my reasoning To reveal myself for I have tarried concealed in the bushes too long Surrender my fevered lips with yours uniting us in a blissful kiss Reject not my advances my love - lest I become but a fractured song
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I awaken to a songbird singing a sweet, lilting melody Golden sun just above the horizon warms my face A skein of geese fly southward across an endless sea Yes, this, is my world and yes I am alive! Still, these visions of an otherworldly creature Keep flashing before my eyes, causing me to ponder Just what has transpired of late, an adventure Into the unknown and perhaps… the unknowable? The pounding in my head has dissipated, my energy renewed. But just where am I? How will I survive this lonely isolation? A sudden sense of urgency impels me to search for food I turn toward the lush, forested hills in an attempt to… My eyes - transfixed! Someone emerging from amongst the trees? A godlike creature with cherubic eyes - the angel in my dreams! Perhaps this is heaven after all; instinctively I fall upon my knees And prostrate myself before this divine, celestial being My benefactor touches my hand, beckoning me to stand upon my feet She tries to speak but the sound is unlike anything ever heard, Somewhat like a gentle flute with deliberate, melodic tones that tweet At varying intervals, a hypnotic sonance that sets me at ease I ask where she is from, what does she want from me? She places my hand over her heart and hers upon mine As I look intently into her eyes my spirit is suddenly set free, Transported somehow to an alien world of transcendent splendor A cacophony of sounds, colors, and thoughts flood my brain Softly, deftly, she places her finger on my brow and the confusion ends The words ‘breath of life, bonded for life’ play like a freight train Roaring through my head, over and over until I finally understand - She wants to take me with her…
Planets align and our energies entwine A confetti of stars showers as lips meet in a raptured kiss once more...
Finale coming soon... Acknowledgement: Once again my thanks goes to the most talented poet July Morning. I’m so pleased and not at all astonished how our thoughts themed on the production of this sequel as with the whole story. Maria
A Maria Williams and July Morning collaboration 31 January 2018
Music: Julian Lloyd Webber, Cello - The London Symphony Orchestra - ‘The first time ever I saw your face. June 2016 Quote: Shakespeare from Henry VI - *I can express no kinder sign of love, than this kind kiss.

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Date: 2/18/2018 8:34:00 AM
It s again a brilliant write, I was used to thi k that it s humans who can fall in love at first sight, but no even aliens have such emotions( just kidding) a really beautiful write,
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Date: 2/19/2018 4:55:00 AM
Yes you never know with these Aliens do you? ....Maria
Date: 2/2/2018 9:35:00 AM
Don’t underestimate your own talent. Both parts form this dance..
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Date: 2/2/2018 4:26:00 PM
Maria's the real genius!
Date: 2/2/2018 9:25:00 AM
Glad I checked back in for Part 2. Absorbing, entertaining, novelistic. Much enjoyed! When is Chapter 3?
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Date: 2/2/2018 8:32:00 AM
A brilliant continuation, eagerly awaiting the finale, Maria and Tom:)
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Date: 2/2/2018 6:24:00 AM
Simply stunning... I'm keeping this for a reread. You two are just amazing together! I love it! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 2/8/2018 2:14:00 PM
Smiles back, in triplicate :) :) :)
Date: 2/1/2018 11:26:00 AM
Well done, Maria & Tom. The story continues...this calls for a happy ending...bridging the gap between humans & aliens...a situation to fall back on in the future when earth finds itself in catastrophic situation! Regards // paul
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Date: 2/1/2018 9:03:00 PM
Happy ending? Not sure, you know me, Tommy and Victor seem to like our unusual twist.Lol. Thanks Paul for coming back, and your support always....Maria
Date: 2/1/2018 9:54:00 AM
Fantastic write, I am glad I came back to read the next part..
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Date: 2/1/2018 9:01:00 PM
Thanks Eve so glad that you did my friend....Maria xxx
Date: 2/1/2018 7:38:00 AM
Love spans the distance between galaxies..Very nicely done Maria
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Date: 2/1/2018 9:05:00 PM
It does indeed Joseph. Thanks for visiting and your lovely comments always....Maria
Date: 2/1/2018 6:06:00 AM
- A wonderful collaboration between you ... yes, I can see this must have part 3 as an end to the story Maria :) ... exciting ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/1/2018 9:07:00 PM
So glad that you think so Anne-Lise,thanks always for the support my dear friend....Maria xxx
Date: 1/31/2018 8:32:00 PM
Maria, my dear friend, this is just a stunning and outstanding part 2 of your collaboration with July Morning. This is completely captivating and wondrously intoxicating - I don't want this science-fiction-love-story to end.. Such brilliant, beautiful and bewitching story telling. Warmest wishes and hugs my friend! ~Susan P.S. can't wait for the finale :)
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Date: 2/1/2018 9:11:00 PM
Oh Susan my dear sweet friend, thank you so much for all the lovely compliments. Well thanks to JM this story has taken on all the thrills and spills of a science fiction block buster. Keep tuned Susan, and hang in there for the ride....Maria xxx
Date: 1/31/2018 8:27:00 AM
So glad I came back. I look forward to the finale. This really is a delight to read and excellent story telling.
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Date: 2/1/2018 6:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Richard, I really appreciate your wonderful comments. JM is an excellent writer so agree....Maria
Date: 1/31/2018 4:05:00 AM
Just beautiful! It's like a movie in my head...one I can't wait to see. I really love this story and the way you two have weaved and written it so "poetically" into a love story, science fiction style. I love the music too.
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Date: 1/31/2018 4:35:00 AM
Thanks so much Carole for taking the time to visit and your lovely comments always my friend. Grand Finale with the brilliant poetic mind of JM at the helm should be interesting. Yeah I thought you would like the music....Maria
Date: 1/31/2018 12:58:00 AM
Best laugh all day. LOVE IT. Of course, he's going all the way to HELL. She'll probably eat him in the end... I await the next installment with bated breath...digging "natheless"...p.s. that's a paler version of what I envisaged....I was going for Othello. Best story on PS so far!
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Date: 1/31/2018 4:29:00 AM
Thanks for the visit and comments Leanne. Eat him!! No! I happen to have a soft spot for this Earthling, we got to keep him around for a bit longer, especially as theres a suggestion going around of a baby? Now theres a thought worth considering. Can always depend on JM for the thrills, Grand Finale should have all that and more,Thanks for the comments, always appreciate them...Maria xx
Date: 1/30/2018 2:51:00 PM
A great combination of emotion and science fiction, the meeting and falling in love of an extra-terrestrial and a human. But where will it end? Are they compatible? I await the third instalment with eagerness.
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Date: 1/31/2018 4:23:00 AM
Well we'll have to wait and see wont we? Thanks Victor so glad that you are enjoying this, I know how you love your scifi stuff. Thanks always for your support dear friend....Maria
Date: 1/30/2018 12:38:00 PM
Nice working with you too. part 3 gonna be a thrilla!
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Date: 1/31/2018 4:20:00 AM
Sounds Thrilling JM.....Maria
Date: 1/30/2018 10:31:00 AM
After this superb transcendental saga I think each one of us would dream to come in contact with such an alien being so as to be transported in a place of heavenly bliss ! You have mesmerized us dear friends so as to ask for more! Congratulations for your...upcoming win! haha! Ecstatic dearest Maria and J.M.!
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Date: 1/31/2018 4:18:00 AM
It would be exciting wouldn't it? So happy that you enjoyed it my friend. Thanks always for your lovely presence and support. ...Maria xxx
Date: 1/30/2018 9:14:00 AM
A fascinating story you two have created..though I had hoped for a supernal baby between the two love interests; and the other world-power demanding a release of the baby...Does she stay with the baby or does she go back to her world? I must wait for your next episode! Kudos to you Maria and JM.
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Date: 1/31/2018 4:15:00 AM
A baby, now thats a thought. Lol.Thanks so much Vijay for your insightful and profound thoughts always. Thanks always for your support my friend....Maria
Date: 1/30/2018 8:54:00 AM
As commented on Tommy's poem, a great second part, which seems like there is going to be a part three... I see you used my photo also...
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Date: 1/30/2018 8:58:00 AM
Thanks Si, your comments are very appreciated. Ooops! - about your photo - It was on public domain so we thought it was OK for us to use? (Are you going to charge us 'mates rates') ...Maria
Date: 1/30/2018 8:30:00 AM
The compelling tale continues... I await the finale with bated breath!
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Date: 1/30/2018 9:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Robert for following the story and liking it. Much appreciated. We'll do our best to satisfy you...Maria