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You stole in unbeknown'st to me with soft and silent tread, You laid your hands upon my soul and my confusions fled. It stretched and flexed its crumpled wings unused to flights of joy, it tripped and skipped in gratitude just like a little boy, and by degrees my barren heart took solace from above, my empty feelings of despair transfigured by Your love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/2/2009 6:24:00 AM
Extremely inspirational. Would love such visit to soothe my soul. Beautiful write. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/2/2009 4:34:00 AM
Great use of imagery, nice poignant wording...Raul
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Date: 1/2/2009 3:51:00 AM
How beautiful and touching, a lucky man you are. a wonderful, gentle rhyme. love, Kristin
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Date: 1/1/2009 8:58:00 PM
Lovely, Keith. Such a tender write. The cadence is perfect. Wonderful phrases throughout this endearing write. You have such a beautiful way with words> Love, Robin
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Date: 1/1/2009 12:38:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery for a creative perspective. I especially like the second stanza. Keep on writing. Have a wonderful New Year. Karen
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