Visitor

A robin hopped by, I usually see them in spring So nice to see today, with everything A friendly visit oh, so close to see Something about them brings peace within me They do bring a calm type of nurturing It tilts its head as if ready to sing I thank my sweet visitor on this day As it stops, quickly hops, then moves away Heidi Sands 9/15/20

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David Walker

Date: 9/16/2020 9:40:00 AM

I like it's completeness. I love its imagery

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/16/2020 2:31:00 PM

Thank you David. I am happy you love it :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/16/2020 8:42:00 AM

Yes. Robins are beautiful and charming. They remind me that God has been so very creative with His creation. God bless you, dear friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/16/2020 2:31:00 PM

Yes, they are. God certainly has been creative with his creation. Thank you and bless you too :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/16/2020 7:42:00 AM

Hello Heidi, the robins have a beautiful song. They are beautiful birds. i also like the Dove they have a beautiful song. How are you today. I hope you are doing better today. I miss you. Hugs Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/16/2020 11:14:00 AM

Hello Heidi, I feel better knowing that you are out of the hospital. Now recovering. Happy to hear you will be here more now. Hugs Darlene

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/16/2020 8:19:00 AM

Hi Darlene. Yes, I just love the Robins. I am doing better today, thank you. I am out of the hospital and recovering. I should be here a bit more now. Thank you so much for your kind comment! I hope you have a nice day! Hugs :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/15/2020 10:26:00 PM

Birds are truly inspiring, Heidi:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/16/2020 6:03:00 AM

They certainly are. Thank you Jo :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/15/2020 8:45:00 PM

A brief but inspiring visit, Wonderful write Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/16/2020 6:00:00 AM

Thank you very much Joseph :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/15/2020 8:01:00 PM

As sweet as sugar, Heidi. So delicately penned. 100 Degrees of Delight! :) Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/16/2020 6:02:00 AM

Thank you very much Gershon :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/15/2020 6:47:00 PM

Hello Heidi. It always amazes me how you can watch them swoop in and immediately catch a worm. They must have really sharp eyesight. Nice soothing write. Hoping you are feeling better.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/16/2020 6:00:00 AM

I love to see the Robin. They are interesting to watch and they look back at you too. I am happy you found this to be soothing. I am still recovering. Thank you DT :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/15/2020 3:34:00 PM

Robin's visit made your day today. Beautifully captured moments Heidi--always charming to watch them hop and dance, as you so well illustrate.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/16/2020 5:59:00 AM

Yes, it was nice to see. Thank you for your kind comment :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/15/2020 1:58:00 PM

they are such charming birds Heidi we see them throughout the year, but they are so much more visible in the winter months with their scarlet breast:-) hugs JAN xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/15/2020 2:32:00 PM

They sure are charming Jan. I love to see them. Thank you ...hugs. :)