Visiting Mother's Grave

The words of a poem,
like the notes of a song,
often fall flat, or off key.

Today, words 
reached toward clouds, 
floated on soft winds 
with haunting notes.

The sad of honest pain
tore my heart,
sang of death, 
beneath earth’s hard crust.

Yet, I saw her eyes 
crinkle with laughter,
then felt her hand rest 
on my arm.

The time is near.
She’ll be waiting,
with arms spread wide,
to welcome me home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Guzzi Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 5:53 PM
A pleasure to read your verse this evening. Light & Love
Adams Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 6:46 AM
Thank you, Debbie. Happy to have your visit. April has arrived, and Spring is in full swing. All the best to you.
A   Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 12:27 AM
a heartfelt poem... nice to read. LINDA
Adams Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 7:20 AM
Thanks, Linda, for the visit to read. One of the nicest things about PoetrySoup is the ability to connect with other poets. Blessings.
George   Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 5:07 PM
So heart-felt, dear Cona. Elaine
Adams Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 7:18 AM
Thanks, Elaine for the visit. Always happy to hear from you. Blessings.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 3:58 PM
Cona, this poem is wrapprd with love and so moving. It provokes thoughts of their own reuniting in the readers mind. Beautiful! #7 Blessings, Connie
Adams Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 5:35 PM
So grateful to you, Connie, for the visit, and for taking the time to read. You are more than generous. All the best to you!
Austin Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Some might call the experience paranormal. but the blessing is universal and stems from love. I love this poem. And thanks for reading my stuff. daver
Adams Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 11:47 AM
Thank you, Daver, for your generous comment, and thanks for reading. A visit is always welcome. Blessings.
Apell Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 1:08 AM
"The words of a poem, like the notes of a song, often fall flat, or off key." Very true, especially at those moments when we try to capture our loss in words on the passing of a loved one. "Yet, I saw her eyes crinkle with laughter, then felt her hand rest on my arm." Death would not be so painful if this vision you express could float across the chasm that separates us from the departed. Touching poem!
Adams Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 1:55 PM
Thank you, Agona Apell, for the visit to read. Always appreciated. I have written many poems about Mother. She was an exceptional person, and as long as I am alive, she lives on in memory. Our treasured memories are the balm which soothes our grief. Blessings.
Devnath  Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 2:27 PM
Heartfelt poem my lovely friend. Mother is mother, so lovely always, my lovely friend,bl
Adams Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 4:16 PM
Thanks for the visit to read, BL. All the best to you.
Gupta Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Beautiful words in a melancholy vein...
Adams Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Thank you, Probir, for the visit, and the generous comment. Blessings to you.
Nehls Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Hi Cona. A very heartfelt poem that truly touched my heart. My mother passed on a few years ago and I still think of her daily. Thanks so much for sharing..... Robert.
Adams Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 9:10 AM
Thanks to you, Robert, for the visit to read. And for taking the time to leave a comment. Blessings.
Difford Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Cona - Thank you!, for sharing......hang on!!!!, to that hope!!! in dark and hard times. 'Eyes crinkle with laughter and felt her hand rest - inspired!, with that truth!!, very!!, special, and very! special given....God sent......yes indeed!!!!!, she will!!!!!, be waiting for you to welcome you home. Kim x
Adams Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:50 PM
Thank you, Kim. Enjoyed your enthusiastic response. Blessings to you.
Difford Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:08 PM
God will!!!!, underpin you Cona,under everything. Kim x
Allison Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:04 PM
I'm sure she'll be looking down waiting for the day you join her Cona - your uplifting words brought a huge lump to my throat:-) hugs jan xx
Adams Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:51 PM
Thank you, Jan. Your visits are always welcome. All the best.
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