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Visiting Dad

Through tall iron gates into total serenity as past meets present, though undesired, from consecrated earth of high fertility giant conifers and oaks flourish, undisturbed, sorrow and pain dispersed over green marbled ground, labels engraved in black or gold where loved ones are found, roads and paths that direct our route to our deceased, history of local communities, gathered without discrimination, ivy entwining distinctive arching pagoda,over flagged passage inviting participants that resist, yet encouraging minds imagination, sight of a procession, sad occupants in spotless black carriage, freshly dug earth mounded covered with green baize, creation of a hole, permanent dwelling for all time, the resting place of their soul, a place where our past relatives and friends can be visited, deep below the soil covered by a carpet of emerald green, loved ones that will never again be seen. Composed 12/06/2016.

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Date: 9/20/2017 8:24:00 PM
Congratulations Roy on your win with this heartfelt and beautiful poem.
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Roy Pett
Date: 9/21/2017 3:06:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Susan, so pleased you liked this poem. :))
Date: 9/20/2017 2:32:00 PM
congratulations Roy!
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Roy Pett
Date: 9/20/2017 4:14:00 PM
Thank you very much Jack, much appreciated. :))
Date: 9/20/2017 1:10:00 PM
Roy, so beautiful ...CONGRATULATIONS!
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Roy Pett
Date: 9/20/2017 1:35:00 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment, so pleased that this was placed and really pleased that you liked it. :))
Date: 9/20/2017 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations Roy! :)
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Roy Pett
Date: 9/20/2017 8:41:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi for your support and encouragement. :))
Date: 9/20/2017 7:39:00 AM
Congrats Roy!
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Roy Pett
Date: 9/20/2017 8:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Vijay your very kind. :))
Date: 9/20/2017 7:11:00 AM
heartfelt sad write Roy.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Date: 9/20/2017 8:36:00 AM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment and placing this in your contest, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))
Date: 12/14/2016 4:11:00 PM
Such a heartfelt poem Roy. I can picture your walk in the cemetery so so vividly - a very touching poem:-) thanks for sharing:-) hugs Jan xx
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Roy Pett
Date: 12/14/2016 4:40:00 PM
Thank you very much Jan for your thoughts they are much appreciated.
Date: 12/6/2016 1:52:00 PM
Nice, Roy. Sad, deep feeling, excellent setting of the scene.
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Roy Pett
Date: 12/6/2016 2:06:00 PM
Thank you very much Doug, I feel so privileged to receive a comment like this, so encouraging.

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