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VISIT TO SANTA She eyed the 'old elf' with a look of concern; Cautious, yet, curiously disdained; Though, unimpressed with the thought of it all, The overall enticement remained; She had heard of his acts of kindness; His candy canes were superb; His wardrobe was impeccable; However, the lumps of coal did disturb; The smiles of her peers was unmistakable; Would they really steer her wrong? Could all the stories and poems be true? Was there truth to all the songs? So big, he was; all that white hair; The belly, the red nose and cheeks; The wire-rimmed glasses upon his chubby face; She had been eyeing him now for weeks! So, throwing caution to the wind, she took a step; The next was easier and soon, She found herself in his lap; A hush had filled the room! He spoke so gently, like a melody so sweet; A lilting phrase that soothed; When she stepped down, her heart felt light, She truly, had been moved! Walking away, she stopped and looked, At the new friend she had just made; He waved at her, then gave a wink; A special bond that wouldn't soon fade! E. Self 2015

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Date: 12/19/2015 11:32:00 PM
Elzie, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. I'm also sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do. ~SKAT LOVE~"
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Date: 12/7/2015 7:41:00 PM
Elzie, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/1/2015 3:56:00 PM
Hi Elzie, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 12/4/2015 9:10:00 AM
Hi Elzie, if you haven't found it yet, it is located on the top left corner under the "Member Area" and is listed as "Submit Poem."
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Elzie Self
Date: 12/2/2015 9:03:00 AM
Ty kindly...I'm having a problem this morning finding the post a new poem feature.. Could you help me please?
Date: 12/1/2015 11:44:00 AM
Thank you kindly!!
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Date: 12/1/2015 10:59:00 AM
Elzie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Elzie Self
Date: 12/2/2015 9:08:00 AM
I'm having a problem this morn finding the post new poem feature. Could you help me plz?
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Elzie Self
Date: 12/2/2015 9:06:00 AM
Hi Skat.. I'm a retired musician. I've written/composed for 38 yrs. My writings include Family, spiritual and fiction amongst many other topics. I look forward to reading your work!!

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