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Visions of the Vale

“Look deep into nature and you’ll understand everything better.”
Albert Einstein 

I stood on the sloped path near the waterfall.
Mesmerised by the sound of falling water.
     All around grew green-leafed ferns,
     While tall poplars and redwoods provided
Ample shade that covered the running stream.
Tall purple pickerel plants, scarlet cardinal plants,
Everything contributed to a sublime, picturesque sight.
     A symphony of sounds emanated completely around.
     Frogs croaked in great abundance, jumping in and out,
Of the clear stream where fish swam toward the sea.
And all around, busy bees fluttered over exotic flowers,
Where nectar provided them with such sweet nourishment.


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 4/21/2025 10:37:00 PM
Dearest Victor,your poem is so serene and vivid—it reads like a gentle walk through paradise. I could almost hear the waterfall and the croaking frogs, feel the cool shade of the poplars, and see the vibrant colors of the pickerel and cardinal plants. You’ve captured the beauty and harmony of nature so effortlessly. Such a peaceful and refreshing read—thank you for sharing this lovely moment. Good luck in the contest. I'll be posting a video tonight, a collaboration with Michael Tor. I hope you will like it...Hugs
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Date: 4/21/2025 8:40:00 PM
I have landed in a bewitching location and what I see all around is Nature's mesmerizing beauty, serenity and grandeur. Beautifully crafted. Dear Victor, Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 4/21/2025 9:26:00 AM
what wonderful description Victor no wonder you got first place, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/21/2025 7:14:00 AM
Perfect quote for your gorgeous write dear Victor. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 4/20/2025 10:06:00 PM
This is lovely, and congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/20/2025 10:59:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 4/20/2025 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write, quote and pretty picture. Happy/Blessed Easter Day......
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Date: 4/19/2025 11:19:00 AM
Victor, beautiful and serene imagery. Best wishes in the contest. - hugs
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Date: 4/19/2025 7:23:00 AM
The place where I long to spend time.Very nice
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Date: 4/19/2025 6:08:00 AM
Beautiful peaceful poem ! Very nice. The quote from Einstein, made me think of my dog named Einstein. He is in training class , very smart :)
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Date: 4/19/2025 3:26:00 AM
Colorful, descriptive and creative. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 4/19/2025 2:15:00 AM
What a wonderful image your words put in the reader's mind Victor, beautiful and soothing… Beryl
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Date: 4/18/2025 2:08:00 PM
Your poem describes such a lush, beautiful setting! It was a pleasure to be transported there, through the magic of your imagery. :)
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Date: 4/18/2025 9:09:00 AM
Such an incredible poem that focuses on waterfalls, streams, and the sensations evoked by the gentle waves. It hints at themes of solitude, discovery, and the peace found in nature, as well as the tactile experience of watching cascades
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Date: 4/18/2025 6:27:00 AM
Sounds like a slice of Eden to me. Lovely place indeed to stop, maybe dwell eternally given the option.
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Date: 4/18/2025 3:44:00 AM
Nothing beats being out amongst nature Victor, I love being outdoors, the weather doesn't faze me. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 4/18/2025 2:37:00 AM
- A beautiful nature experience, Victor :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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