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Visions of Childhood

i can’t complete a scene no voices heard in early years i’d not retain i’m all alone i see it all - school tables the painting easel the cardboard bricks graham crackers and milk i’d bounce along a truck tire - sandbox of neighbor ate cream cheese & jelly sandwiches on the braided rug their mother crafted but don’t recall our conversation life was quiet i took it in the subtle moods and the trees were always my friends the breeze before the storm the excitement as they whipped and roared - i retain this the forest of my mind tethered to sweet honesty and honeysuckle scents to loneliness and friends later I’d own a record player go ‘round and ‘round with puppy love and shake your booty hang out with girlfriends talking of spooky things and boys i’d pack my bag fly south in the Winter take hold of my seabag go adventuring searching for words 8/3/2022

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Date: 8/7/2022 10:35:00 PM
I love these memories - especially this one Kim "later I’d own a record player go ‘round and ‘round with puppy love and shake your booty hang out with girlfriends talking of spooky things and boys"
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Date: 8/5/2022 4:24:00 PM
I enjoy looking back at the changes in life as I experienced the adventures and challenges of growing up. Thanks for the poem filled with memories, Kim. Have a great week! Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2022 5:41:00 PM
Glad you read this one, Bill! Have a great week too!
Date: 8/4/2022 1:52:00 AM
It all depends on what sort of life one had in the past. There are times when I'd rather forget. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/4/2022 6:22:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Who you are now is important. Though we don’t always like the path, it leads to who we are. God bless you, my friend!
Date: 8/3/2022 1:51:00 PM
Good one, Kim! The use of short lines makes for easy and quick reading yet clear of meaning. Thanks for posting it. / Maurice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2022 2:36:00 PM
Thank you! I appreciate your comment, my friend!
Date: 8/3/2022 8:22:00 AM
Lovely to look back Kim and retrace the steps we took in life Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2022 11:53:00 AM
Thanks, Tom, my friend!

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