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Visions of Ancient Gem Stones

Visions Of Ancient Gem Stones

Original in a complex textured bed of ugly scattered rocks
A reddish garnet, more on the line of purplish red
Pretending to be ruby or ruby like
Lifted up in Pyramid form before prospectors 
It reached out to them with its red shocking facets first

Next to this wondrous find, holding on to dirt and earth
A ruby captured by the miners yellow glow from helmets
Embedded next to garnet almost out of sight
In brilliance and simplicity, sitting there and gleaming
Down where the air is thicker than quick sand

Cold men from entrenched caverns, filthy from head to toe, worked
Stumbled over other elements that came up from nowhere
Turquoise, opals, and jade, opened up to clinking tools
Unearthed with alien forming faces

Amber grew there too for fifty thousand years
Waiting to be born up in miner’s hands
Rock like wrinkled fingers that still touched
Their souls and work with gentle grace

Moving down deeper in the twisting mine
Safire fragments clutched by old men they never met before
Emeralds could not hide forever in their fervor to be green 
They were too precious and must be cleaned and prepped  

Workers gazed as topaz buds, emerged in multi-color patches
As they moved in with the precision of a surgeon
Tools so subtle to remove the mysteries from their homes
Other elements came up like magic
As the men marched down the mines, pickax in hand
Visions of ancient stones appeared among the rocks
While pictures of wealth and gold worked on their minds

Created on 11/09/14 for Precious Stones And Gems – Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/9/2014 9:38:00 PM
Wonderful and descriptive write, Earl! I enjoyed reading tonight...love and blessins, Rhonda
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/10/2014 9:11:00 AM
Hi Rhonda, Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day. Take care. Earl
Date: 11/8/2014 6:28:00 PM
This brought my home back to mind. I come from a Gold mining town named Virginiatown. It wasn't gems but instead Gold. You decribed the mens hands well. I enjoyed this piece.
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Date: 11/8/2014 7:14:00 PM
Hi Richard, Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments. I'm glad you liked it. As you can see, this is a long poem with a lot of different gems. It took some time to compose. I didn't realize how hard mining is. Next time I'll probably just do a gold mine poem. Thanks for the idea. Have a great day. Earl

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