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Visions of a Snowy Owl

I live on the frozen tundra where cold winds blow I'm never bothered by the amount of ice and snow The thickness of my feathers are deep at my chest like a downy insulated coat that's better than a vest. I'm busy keeping watch over my two mated hens who sit on the nests we've built on mounded dens. I've eleven mouths to feed, all screaming for food at night I'm quite busy searching the neighborhood. My golden eyes are keen so I can see best in the dark When I dive for a morsel I never miss my targeted mark. I hear something scampering beneath the blanket of snow. It's a scurrying little mouse. Be right back, I have to go. Another snack for my babies, newly out of their shells. They think they have to eat when their stomach compels. Now that it's quiet, I'll perch on a branch up in this tree and keep a watch out for predators who want to eat me. Hunting is much easier because my fur coat is purest white. I blend in just perfectly with the snow by day and at night. I can turn my head in any direction by swiveling it around Until my prey approaches, I'm good at not making a sound. A fox is creeping in from the North, hoping for some action but my sharp talons will chase him away, to my satisfaction. Excuse me for a moment, but I see an approaching artic hare, a hardy meal for the chicks, my mates will chew to prepare. There are humans living near by, in a log cabin over the hill they leave meat out for me when they make a fresh kill. I've no reason to fear them because they never hunt for owl. I love living in this frigid climate where I'm free to fly and prowl. __________________________________________________ January 31st, 2016 Owl Personification Contest by Eve Roper
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Deschler Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 8:06 PM
A great entry for this contest, Lin. Very nicely penned! Congrats on your win as well!
Lane Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 8:42 PM
Thanks so very much, Kelly.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 10:07 AM
You did a fantastic job on this one Lin. Congratulations on your win! #7
Lane Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Hey Connie! I'm glad you were able to comment...Thank you SO VERY much.
A. Sharma Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 1:23 AM
Wonderful write Lin n so is the win.. big congrats!
Lane Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 4:39 AM
Thank you, Upma.
May Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 11:07 AM
Congrats on a great win Lin
Lane Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 11:15 AM
I appreciate that, Joseph. Thanks.
Haight Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 9:57 AM
A great personification with so much description and imagery, Lin. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Lane Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 10:01 AM
Thanks a whole lot, Sandra.. huggin ya back.
George   Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 8:16 AM
Wonderful personification, Lin. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Lane Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 8:20 AM
Thanks, Elaine. I was almost ready to start hooting when I'd finished ~ lol
Turner Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 7:30 AM
Peaches, you have swooped in and swept off with another prize winner. Congratulations. Well deserved, just absolutely too talented. Love your heart!! Peace:)
Lane Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 8:20 AM
Thanks very much, Danny. Careful or you'll spoil me with so many nice compliments ~ all of which are appreciated.
Roper Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 11:00 PM
Lin, your “ Visions of a Snowy Owl” was wonderful! Thank you so much for writing a very special poem for my contest I was honored. Happy Valentine’s Day Hugs Eve
Lane Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 5:06 AM
Thanks, Eve. I enjoy the challenges.
George   Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Wonderful personification, Lin. Sure to top the winners list. Elaine
Lane Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 3:51 PM
Thanks,Elaine. I appreciate your kind comment.
Laurie Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 6:49 PM
G'day Lin ... excellent description from you Lin as you take on the life of an owl - Lindsay
Lane Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Thank you so much, Lindsay. I appreciate your kind comments.
Sage Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 7:13 PM
personification...you've got yourself in an owl's attire, wow that! you'll make one good hunter...lol, just joking, you've done such great write Lin, your pen's dripped a golden ink (or may i say an OWL-en ink lol) excellent as always, best of luck in the contest
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 7:51 PM
hoo? me? Love your comments, Sage. Thanks so very much.
Allison Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 1:07 PM
Fabulous personification Lin I think this will do very well for you in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 3:33 PM
Thanks, Jan, and hugs comin' back to you.
Ebbs Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 9:37 AM
I like this, nice write!
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 3:32 PM
Thanks a lot, Edward.
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