Visions Creeping - Sos

In the ocean of my sleep stars glow like fragile seeds
and I sail across the celestial tranquil black sky
where silence is hanging sublime
and I fall through this dark warm dream
my hair a flowing river
and I drift to beautiful places and green lush temples 
but my tranquility is soon hanging from branches
dripping in the grey woods of my mind
lost in a crowd of nameless faces
thick like trees in the woods at night
with eyes blank as statues
and a hundred whispers silent to my hearing 
just shadows swaying in the silence- swaying in rhythm 
O, it is a restless dream, endless
I want to shout-  stop, stop worshiping golden Gods
you are empty, alone and cold bone
but I am lost in the sounds of silence, a dream prisoner
lost in the whirling silence that surrounds me
and the stars are flashing, exploding, bursting, blazing
and my dream is falling to ashes
I wake to a dawn distant and dark
with echoes of silent thoughts
in my heart . . . 

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July 24, 2019


Poetry/Free Verse/Visions Creeping
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1168-509-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Inspiration - Sounds of Silence, Simon and Garfunkel


Written for the contest, Sounds of Silence
sponsor, John Hamilton

Fourth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 9:04 PM
Awesome mellow rhythm, Constance. Congrats on your win.
La France Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 11:47 AM
Line , thank you for the congratulations
Mcgee Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 9:03 AM
A lovely tribute. Congrats on your win.
La France Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 11:48 AM
Jeanne thanks for the lovely and congrats
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 1:54 AM
Congratulations, Constance on your great win with a beautiful flowing verse.
La France Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 11:47 AM
Subimal thank you for the congratulations
Lamoureux Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 1:54 PM
Congrats!
La France Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 11:49 AM
Richard thanks for the congrats
Hamilton Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 12:51 PM
This is one of your very best Constance, I marvel at the free flow of thoughts, almost like stream of consciousness writing but more lucid and appealing, well done congrats on a high placement!
La France Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 11:50 AM
John thanks for the contest and for my placement
Lamoureux Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 9:22 AM
I enjoyed this very much. Good luck in the contest.
La France Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 11:51 AM
Thank you Richard
Adams Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 10:10 PM
Beautifully penned, I like your interpretation of the song’s meaning :) hugs
La France Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 11:52 AM
Thank you Sandra
Wanter Avatar
July 25, 2019 at 10:15 AM
Simply beautiful, DH. One of your best! A fav.
La France Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 11:54 AM
Thanks Sunlite
Parker Avatar
July 24, 2019 at 6:51 PM
strong imagery to a complex song that means different things to different people, very well done Dear Heart...good luck
La France Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 11:54 AM
Frederic thanks for visiting and for commenting
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2019 at 3:25 PM
you have interpreted this song so brilliantly Constance! I love the song but doubt I can write for the contest! good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 11:55 AM
Jan thanks for your kind words and I bet you could !
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