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Vision A zephyr with breaths of April after rain whispered: “sleep not this summer day.” He stirred, woke up and saw a heavenly face eyes blue as the sky and the skin of the apparition had the hue of un-profaned lips only the newly born possess. He smiled reached out to touch the divine being, but it had disappeared in a miasma of the everlasting, but leaving behind a hope as sweet scent of jasmine.

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Date: 6/18/2013 7:49:00 AM
Dear Jan - It was wonderful being lured to shangri-la and then stung by the wasp, "miasma" How you burst the bubble in gorgeous saccharine is the mark of your lovely imagination and humor which keeps me coming back for more. I'll hate it if I read this wrong. love, Kathy
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 6/19/2013 2:43:00 AM
no my dear you have not

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