Viscous Body of Woe -13

VISCOUS BODY OF WOE fluid brain floods mind neurons flee boat breaks as dreams drown June 24, 2018

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Susan Gentry

Date: 7/2/2018 4:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Well done. :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/3/2018 12:10:00 AM

Thank you, Susan

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/1/2018 8:29:00 PM

Poem reveals that you are a scientist. Congrats to win.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/2/2018 4:48:00 AM

Thank you.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/1/2018 3:09:00 PM

I had to place this because the word viscous has too much power over my imagination ;) Congratulations on your win in my contest Subimal! xomo

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/2/2018 4:48:00 AM

Thank you, Moureen.

Lyric Man

Date: 6/25/2018 6:52:00 AM

Wow.. I love this!

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/26/2018 1:33:00 AM

Thank you, Lyric for your visit.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/26/2018 1:33:00 AM

Thank you, Lyric for your visit.