Virtually Priceless

i found him

        we roam
      through the rec room
    two avatars
  dodging balls
shooting bows and arrows
  even grabbing donuts
    from the counter
      no calories in that
        but having fun with the kid

               that doesn’t fade away

7/27/2022

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Date: 7/30/2022 5:00:00 PM
this is precious, Kim!
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Date: 7/30/2022 10:38:00 AM
Much joy to the heart kim is brought by engaging with childrens, while playing. I sense the joy of that in your wonderful Poetry this afternoon. God bless you for sharing...
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Date: 7/30/2022 9:37:00 AM
There is nothing like "having fun with a kid", as a grandma to ten, I appreciate this now.
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Date: 7/29/2022 5:11:00 PM
I can eat all day! Sounds like you had a lot of fun with this write, it shows. Enjoy those precious moments Kim. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2022 9:05:00 PM
Thanks so much, Anaya!
Date: 7/29/2022 1:29:00 PM
Gem of a poem my friend. Those moments are indeed priceless!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2022 2:56:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 7/29/2022 12:13:00 PM
thanks for the line-by-line joy of life's simple pleasures....love the simplicity
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2022 2:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tim!
Date: 7/29/2022 11:50:00 AM
Bright, brittle, sparse, and charming. A jaunty write. Robert
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2022 2:51:00 PM
Thank you! Thrilled by your comment! :)
Date: 7/29/2022 10:48:00 AM
Indeed, priceless memories, Kim! Now I'm having the same fun (or probably more) with my granddaughter! Hugs // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2022 11:37:00 AM
Thanks and hugs ~ Kim
Date: 7/29/2022 12:03:00 AM
A priceless poem, so well written. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2022 6:28:00 AM
Thank you! Great big hugs :)
Date: 7/28/2022 10:08:00 PM
an aside that I loved: 'no calories in that.' I like how you threaded the hole of the donut with that one, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2022 6:28:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
Date: 7/28/2022 11:14:00 AM
Live in the moment totally. Don’t even think it’s going away. Lovely write Panagiota xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2022 2:02:00 PM
You are right! Thank you!
Date: 7/28/2022 11:00:00 AM
Those moments are Indeed priceless Kim, sadly they grow up far too quickly. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2022 2:01:00 PM
Yes, they do!
Date: 7/28/2022 10:22:00 AM
Truly wonderful x
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2022 2:01:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/28/2022 10:06:00 AM
and they grow up much too quickly!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2022 2:00:00 PM
For sure!
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