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Viridescent Vines

a crisp chill fills the early morning air  
      dew drops periodically appear on the 
            yellowing blades of grass  
   as a light frost coats 
                                shimmering panes of glass  
    viridescent leaves 
            have long become burnt umber under the 
                       emerging light  
  bronze branches 
    are losing their grip on decaying foliage  
                                               scattered 
  beneath is a graveyard of the last remaining 
            memories of summer  
                                crunching 
      under the feet of cawing crows  
              looking for a feast among the 
                                              mulching wreckage  
  as a swift wind sweeps in from the east petioles separate 
             from slender twigs  
  dispersing the final layers of a once cherished umbrella in 
                        the midday heat  
    what thrived in the prime of life now lays among fading 
                                 tomorrows 
      and bygone warmth  
            night begins to coat the faraway skies  
  and with it brings the first signs of a bitter winter  
      the last remaining signs of vibrancy fly away with the 
                                          canadian geese  
  now all i'm left with is the hollow emptiness of a forlorn 
                        season  
  lighting the wick of an ivory candle just to have a flicker of solace in this deadening 
                                            dark

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Date: 4/9/2025 1:09:00 PM
This outstanding poem focuses on the shift from the splendor of summer to the gloom of winter, illustrating the bleak beauty of this metamorphosis. The theme includes captivating pictures of nature, the cycle of life and death, and the mental impact of loss that comes with seasons of change. The poem provokes nostalgia and grief as it contemplates the passing of time and the unavoidable nature of change. Great poem Sara
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