Virgo's Unbidden Glory

Late-September tingles on wispy nights, blowing a mild drizzle from crisp, eastern winds and lays on the hammock of gilded foliage, to decorate a new season's mantle: Its fire and earth mesh with time's luster, weaving a texture which displays a soul’s contentment from nature's hymn, that deigns to fully acknowledge such Virgo charm boundless, unbidden in a cycle lacquered with marmalade sunsets ; kindling fine autumn's enchantment. Until moonlight glints a lustrous face on lanes where birdsong and lovers croon, through a rush of its tempo’s eloquence gifting the days, oh infinitesimal peace-- then bathes whispered prayers, as russet glow tenderly slips into heaves of its final moment. Form U—U Pick the Form Contest Sponsored by Broken Wings 9/21/2017
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Allison Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 5:01 PM
a very pretty poem Nette:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 12:55 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your placement.
Callus Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 1:27 PM
Beautiful....autumn is in the air and it's already taken hold of your inspired pen, Nette! Congratulations on a much deserved win. Hugs // paul
Stebbings Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 12:54 PM
Very painterly piece, Nette. Can just feel Autumn's early chill. Congrats on your win. // Barry
Roper Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 11:58 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
Pandit Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 10:55 AM
Congrats nette!
La France Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 9:13 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this pretty Ode, well done!
Daniel Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 7:31 AM
Amazing, Nette, I'm bowled over by your imagery :)
Warrior Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 8:02 AM
A wonderful Nette Onclaud glory...beautiful dance of words...god bless...^WW^
Sivey Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 4:42 AM
Wow...wow! You have splintered my mind into pieces by your incredible write here my friend! I am in awe by your delightful poem here, I don't write many odes, maybe I should try my hand at one again! You always inspire me to go beyond my norm Nette, and I love that! I like what I produce from your cleverness and inspiration! What a grandiose piece you have written here, Great Work!!
Pandit Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:20 PM
Wonderful weaving of words--artful lines as always--well written nette--best wishes for a win!
Parker Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 6:05 PM
you paint dear poet, you paint and your pictures velvet soft as they hang in their frames of words...good luck, seems we both chose unbidden...
Smith Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 5:41 PM
Just wonderful nette...best of luck
Em Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 4:51 PM
Brilliant poetry replete with splendor! I am in awe of your flawless language.
Maverick Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 4:42 PM
I think this is a very rich piece Nette, love the emotive word pictures you utilise to great effect here..' Hope alls well.)
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