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Virgo's Unbidden Glory

Late-September tingles on wispy nights, blowing a mild drizzle from crisp, eastern winds and lays on the hammock of gilded foliage, to decorate a new season's mantle: Its fire and earth mesh with time's luster, weaving a texture which displays a soul’s contentment from nature's hymn, that deigns to fully acknowledge such Virgo charm boundless, unbidden in a cycle lacquered with marmalade sunsets ; kindling fine autumn's enchantment. Until moonlight glints a lustrous face on lanes where birdsong and lovers croon, through a rush of its tempo’s eloquence gifting the days, oh infinitesimal peace-- then bathes whispered prayers, as russet glow tenderly slips into heaves of its final moment. Form U—U Pick the Form Contest Sponsored by Broken Wings 9/21/2017

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Date: 9/24/2017 5:01:00 PM
a very pretty poem Nette:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/24/2017 12:55:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your placement.
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Date: 9/23/2017 1:27:00 PM
Beautiful....autumn is in the air and it's already taken hold of your inspired pen, Nette! Congratulations on a much deserved win. Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/23/2017 12:54:00 PM
Very painterly piece, Nette. Can just feel Autumn's early chill. Congrats on your win. // Barry
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Date: 9/23/2017 11:58:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 9/23/2017 10:55:00 AM
Congrats nette!
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Date: 9/23/2017 9:13:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this pretty Ode, well done!
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Date: 9/22/2017 7:31:00 AM
Amazing, Nette, I'm bowled over by your imagery :)
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Date: 9/21/2017 8:02:00 AM
A wonderful Nette Onclaud glory...beautiful dance of words...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/21/2017 4:42:00 AM
Wow...wow! You have splintered my mind into pieces by your incredible write here my friend! I am in awe by your delightful poem here, I don't write many odes, maybe I should try my hand at one again! You always inspire me to go beyond my norm Nette, and I love that! I like what I produce from your cleverness and inspiration! What a grandiose piece you have written here, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/20/2017 7:20:00 PM
Wonderful weaving of words--artful lines as always--well written nette--best wishes for a win!
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Date: 9/20/2017 6:05:00 PM
you paint dear poet, you paint and your pictures velvet soft as they hang in their frames of words...good luck, seems we both chose unbidden...
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Date: 9/20/2017 5:41:00 PM
Just wonderful nette...best of luck
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Date: 9/20/2017 4:51:00 PM
Brilliant poetry replete with splendor! I am in awe of your flawless language.
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Date: 9/20/2017 4:42:00 PM
I think this is a very rich piece Nette, love the emotive word pictures you utilise to great effect here..' Hope alls well.)
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