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Virgin Vs Vixen


Virgin
Untainted, Worthy
Waiting, Pledging, Pacing
Angel, Saint, Plaything, Rebel
Baiting, Mating, Craving
Racy, Spicy
Vixen

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Christopher Bunton

January 3, 2012 at 8:16 PM

I like this! I might have to write one! Very good!

Andrea Dietrich

December 20, 2011 at 5:08 PM

I sure remember this one, natalie, Glad to see it here on winners' circle! Congrats.

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 19, 2011 at 5:49 AM

Congratulations on your super placement in ^Rick's "5~8 Line Poetry" contest Natalie. Love, Carol

Greg Stanley

December 18, 2011 at 10:17 PM

This is an awesome poem Natalie, congratulations on your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

December 18, 2011 at 5:02 PM

Interesting. Congratulations x

Debbie Guzzi

December 18, 2011 at 3:25 PM

goodness! LOL congrad's on your fine verse winning! Happy Holidays

Poet Destroyer A

December 14, 2011 at 10:06 AM

you are bad... Natalie, You hit it right on the nail, but I need the "NAME OF THE SPICE." I'm not gonna announce you as the winner, until you get the entire ingredient in my soup bowl. U truly know your soup. Shame on you, for giving it out so quick. I will announce you as my winner, as soon as you correct the name. Or before someone else does. I'm gonna call you brat#3 of the soup. I'm brat #1 and, Linda-Marie#2 now your brat # 3 now. Brat due to our high spirits and dandy ways..."

Greg Stanley

December 9, 2011 at 10:45 AM

Natalie, very nice, I really like the transition going from "saint to "rebel" as there is such a contrast, good luck and all the best

John Loving Iii

December 7, 2011 at 6:15 PM

why would i have a low oppinion?

Kash Poet

December 3, 2011 at 6:42 PM

Very good Diamante.Should do well in the contest.Thanks for your kind comment at my poem.Best wishes.

Andrea Dietrich

November 23, 2011 at 3:23 PM

soupmail (and CUTE poem by the way)

George Aul

November 23, 2011 at 2:29 PM

There's always more hiding behind the surface.........George

Robert A. Dufresne

November 23, 2011 at 6:37 AM

excellent job with the descript and the form Natalie. Good title. I never tried one of these. NIce

Cyndi Macmillan

November 23, 2011 at 4:35 AM

OHHHHHHH, Like very much. What I like about this? Every woman is both, in her heart, memories. Should place way up there! Cyndi

Kate Moore

November 22, 2011 at 5:29 PM

I LOVE the way the visual plays the perfect partnership with the choice and order of the words. Awesome!

Sara Kendrick

November 22, 2011 at 3:15 PM

Very good one that reads like a winner..Good choice of descriptive words..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my blog..Will soup mail you soon...Sara

Nathan D.

November 20, 2011 at 3:02 PM

"~~Reading Rainbow Theme Song~~ Butterfly in the sky ** I can go twice as high ** Take a look ** It's in a book ** A Reading Rainbow** I can go anywhere ** Friends to know ** And ways to grow ** A Reading Rainbow** I can be anything ** Take a look ** It's in a book ** A Reading Rainbow ** A Reading Rainbow**"