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Virgin Glow

Mirrored surface gleams,
Dancing rays off of the pond:
Pearl light reflections.

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/10/2009 3:05:00 PM

brilliant work ,i missed this one of yours-pearl light reflections--awesome--charma

Kristopher S. Kern

Date: 7/15/2009 6:02:00 AM

maybe a moonlit night in the country? I like it thanks for your congrats...I appreciate it...Kris

Steve Meadows

Date: 7/12/2009 8:46:00 PM

i can invision it in my mind. great job this is a really good haiku

James Fraser

Date: 7/12/2009 11:57:00 AM

Perfect picture in this Haiku Raul>>James

James Peranteau

Date: 7/12/2009 11:32:00 AM

Raul,..this haiku brightens mine every thought,..awesome my poetic friend !!!!! james

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/12/2009 9:09:00 AM

I've seen this in the forest! perfect! Raul, jim

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/12/2009 8:12:00 AM

MMmmmmm would love this picture on my wall ! Serene and lovely....

Jim Wilson

Date: 7/12/2009 7:16:00 AM

Paul, this is really beautiful. I can feel the warm summer sun and see the bright sparks of light on the pond.

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/12/2009 6:19:00 AM

Interesting haiku. Hey Raul! You are such a creative poet. This is going to my favs. I wil have to go read some of your piece. Please Keep writing... Share your thought with us. I love this piece! It's great. Adeleke

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/12/2009 3:24:00 AM

Love your Haiku. Much thought behind the lines. Sara

Sean Kelly

Date: 7/12/2009 3:06:00 AM

Raul , you are the Haiku King !! , and this is a "glowing " example .....

Jayne Eggins

Date: 7/12/2009 1:42:00 AM

Raul of all your work that I have read (which isnt all mind you) this is now my favourite .... glemaing glittering words that sparkle in the beauty ... spectacular ... Love Jayne ... and btw ty for your comments on my work i am still new a little shy but its nice to know people are enjoying my scribbles

Virgin Glow

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