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Virgin Glow

Mirrored surface gleams, Dancing rays off of the pond: Pearl light reflections.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/10/2009 3:05:00 PM
brilliant work ,i missed this one of yours-pearl light reflections--awesome--charma
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Date: 7/15/2009 6:02:00 AM
maybe a moonlit night in the country? I like it thanks for your congrats...I appreciate it...Kris
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Date: 7/12/2009 8:46:00 PM
i can invision it in my mind. great job this is a really good haiku
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Date: 7/12/2009 11:57:00 AM
Perfect picture in this Haiku Raul>>James
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Date: 7/12/2009 11:32:00 AM
Raul,..this haiku brightens mine every thought,..awesome my poetic friend !!!!! james
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Date: 7/12/2009 9:09:00 AM
I've seen this in the forest! perfect! Raul, jim
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Date: 7/12/2009 8:12:00 AM
MMmmmmm would love this picture on my wall ! Serene and lovely....
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Date: 7/12/2009 7:16:00 AM
Paul, this is really beautiful. I can feel the warm summer sun and see the bright sparks of light on the pond.
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Date: 7/12/2009 6:19:00 AM
Interesting haiku. Hey Raul! You are such a creative poet. This is going to my favs. I wil have to go read some of your piece. Please Keep writing... Share your thought with us. I love this piece! It's great. Adeleke
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Date: 7/12/2009 3:24:00 AM
Love your Haiku. Much thought behind the lines. Sara
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Date: 7/12/2009 3:06:00 AM
Raul , you are the Haiku King !! , and this is a "glowing " example .....
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Date: 7/12/2009 1:42:00 AM
Raul of all your work that I have read (which isnt all mind you) this is now my favourite .... glemaing glittering words that sparkle in the beauty ... spectacular ... Love Jayne ... and btw ty for your comments on my work i am still new a little shy but its nice to know people are enjoying my scribbles
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