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Vines In Hues

Feathery vines twine and twist with thirst, carefree they journey wither and hither wild; filigree hues of green they grow unrehearsed, staggeringly beautiful- who cannot be beguiled. Flowing from my hanging baskets so pretty, growing in my window boxes quite over reaching; elbowing for space in the pot it really is a pity, showing they are bullies- other blooms beseeching. ________________________ March 3, 2021 Poetry/Lento/Vines in Hues Copyright Protected, ID 03-1333-726-03 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France

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Arturo Michael

Date: 3/4/2021 10:38:00 AM

Wild vines...growing freely...Nice write.

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2021 2:18:00 PM

Arturo, thanks for the visit and the compliment, appreciate _Constance

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/3/2021 7:14:00 PM

What a surprise for me, to see blooms and bullies in the same stanza. Creative, down-to-earth (so to speak) write, Constance. Nicely done, Gershon

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2021 7:35:00 AM

Gershon, thank you for the compliment, comment and the visit, appreciate _Constance

Judy Ball

Date: 3/3/2021 4:01:00 PM

I do love my garden in summer and love to sit out there amid the flowers, butterflies and bees. Well done Constance. God Bless, JB

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2021 7:46:00 AM

Judy, thank you for the lovely comment and compliment , me too _Constance

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/3/2021 1:49:00 PM

Very pretty and presented such beauty to my thoughts. You made me chuckle with "elbowing for space in the pot it really is a pity showing they are bullies-" I was just in my backyard looking at my Jasmine, which is also being a bully. Trailing across the ground and up into the branches of my orange tree, it is entwining among the leaves of the tree and I better get that taken care of quickly. It is already taking over much of a branch! Spring has certainly sprung. Your poem is lovely <3

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2021 7:37:00 AM

BJ, thank you for the compliment and the visit, yes, though beautiful these meandering vines need to be controlled or they just take over _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/3/2021 11:37:00 AM

- I can see your flowering window ... beautiful, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2021 7:38:00 AM

Anne-Lise, thanks for the visit and the beautiful _Constance

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/3/2021 10:02:00 AM

Nice work, Constance. I saw an underlying message, intentional or unintentional. Wonderful rhymes.

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2021 7:43:00 AM

Milton, thank you for the compliment and visit, yes I can see what you mean, but I was referring to vines for they ove to wander_Constance