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Her chatter annoyed her Queen one day Afflicted she could only echo what others say, In time she just wasted away, rejected by the lover of her choice, 'til she became,just a voice. The legendary nymph Echo,her lover was Narcissis

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Date: 6/16/2010 12:41:00 PM
Interesting write...I will have to look this legend up...I have read about the Narcissis..Would be kinda funny to see the love affair with him....How can one compete with conceit or abnormal self-love?...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/16/2010 8:36:00 AM
Something else Ihave learned from you sir...thank you..BG
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Date: 6/16/2010 12:56:00 AM
Please correct your typo "sh" and Narcissis and "afficted"
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Date: 6/16/2010 12:11:00 AM
A sad but well written narrative. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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