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View From a Hill

Oh, I get such a lovely thrill looking out from the top of a hill The view is very heavenly enchanting me with its beauty Watching the clouds in the sky I see them slowly drifting by Some of them are white and fluffy making me feel bright and cheery Some are shaped like animals A horse, a whale and other mammals Looking down in the valley below Trees are bathed with the sunshine's glow Water in the stream that's flowing is crystal clear and glistening Yes, the view from the top of a hill certainly gives me a lovely thrill

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Date: 12/10/2013 9:35:00 PM
Congrats on the win, john
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John Beharry
Date: 12/19/2013 9:36:00 PM
Thank you, Dr Mehta. Have a great day!
Date: 12/10/2013 8:46:00 PM
John, amazing winning poem....Linda
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John Beharry
Date: 12/19/2013 9:37:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. Have a delightful day!
Date: 12/10/2013 3:46:00 PM
such a pretty view, and poem!! Congrats in the contest.
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John Beharry
Date: 12/19/2013 9:39:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Have a lovely day!
Date: 12/10/2013 11:54:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: "Put Your Best Rhyme Forward" contest: Sponsored by: Just That Archaic Poet - Nice to take part - a pleasure to read yours John - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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John Beharry
Date: 12/19/2013 9:40:00 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise. Have a charming day!

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