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Viet Nam A Love Song

Too far across the sea in a place I'd rather not be, on the winds of war ... another day slips into forever. I keep my head low, pray Charlie doesn't know; once again I'm running for cover. The napalm flames get higher, like an effigy on fire ... burning down my high school memories. I wonder if love still resides in the places we used to hide, or have they disappeared into a jungle another world away. The rapid beating of my heart means another fire-fight is about to start; the M16's fire through the dark like a semi-automatic snare drum. Another battle has begun “Screw this hell hole” rolls of my tongue; this is no way to treat any mother's son … Today have I learned what it means to die? As mortar leaves the sky ... the enemy have given their reply; I listen to other men die seems life all around me is failing. If I ever make it home, I plan never again to roam … get lost in her forever charms ... and on the winds of love, I promise we'll be sailing.

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Date: 12/8/2023 3:41:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts about Vietnam through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 12/6/2023 11:11:00 AM
Brilliant poetry Gregory..
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Date: 12/6/2023 6:15:00 AM
Heartbreaking poetry Greg. Vietnam is a tourist destination now, but your poem is a reminder of what two superpowers can do to a beautiful land and a people living in poverty
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