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Viet Nam

He dreams day dreams of horror. He could be anywhere, But in his mind he’s instantly Back inside that village there. He hears those jungle sounds Again and again and again, Just one of that platoon of Tired and frightened men. He smells again that smell; Napalm that kisses and clings, Turning living feeling bodies Into writhing screaming things. He senses again the movement At the very edge of his sight That sends his reflex fire out Into the dawn’s breaking light. He sees once again the shock And pain on that child’s face And then his mind in horror Drags him back from that place, And he awaits his next visit With anguish and despair. He can’t run from daydreams Trapped in his invalid’s chair

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Date: 10/16/2022 6:14:00 PM
Wow ~ great poem but what a fabulous closing line ! Adding to my FAVE's (minor suggestion: daydreams written as one word in line 1)
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Terry Ireland
Date: 10/17/2022 1:18:00 AM
Hi . Many thanks. I used day dream to reflect that they were recollections of horror rather than the usually pleasant ones associated with daydreams. Best wishes - Terry
Date: 9/3/2022 11:21:00 AM
This is a very profound and thought provoking poem. Do the scars of war ever really heal or do they just lie dormant for awhile?
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Terry Ireland
Date: 9/4/2022 5:05:00 AM
Have spent the last 10 years as a volunteer working with Ex forces members and their families. PTSD can take upto 10 years to show itself and it seems it can be understood but never controlled or got rid of. Many thanks for your comment

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