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Vienna Bombardier

There is a lady
In my Soups,
She writes poetry
As she stoops
To think about philosophy
Or talk about life's mystery.
And everytime I read her songs,
I must use the dictionnary
To understand the rights and wrongs
Of her deep dip-in poetry:

I sent her back
A bomb attack !

Copyright © Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday | Year Posted 2012

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Harry Horsman Date: 1/6/2013 8:38:00 PM just browsing an oldie of yours,, not disappointed.... Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 1/13/2013 3:53:00 AM So kind of you, Harry! Have a nice day! Blessings, Hanitra

Joseph May Date: 11/14/2012 4:05:00 PM She is a nice lady and a prolific writer......thanks for stopping by with your kind words Hanitra Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 11/14/2012 5:19:00 PM ...And coming back soon to read your poems, Joseph! It was a pleasure! Blessings, Hanitra

Vesna Kovrlija Date: 10/28/2012 5:51:00 PM Funny and well-written. Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 11/14/2012 5:21:00 PM Thank you so much, Vesna!

Robert Johnson Date: 10/24/2012 10:00:00 AM I shall call you Voahan. If that's alright. :) Oops, I see you go by Hanitra. So be it. :) I love the way you interplay with what you say on my poems. I appreciate that. You have a talent for the rhyme and rythem yourself I see. Vienna can't help but be pleased. Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 11/18/2012 9:23:00 AM Have been reading you again today, Robert! Such a pleasure! Just before getting back to work...:) Have a good week yourself!Blessings, Hanitra

Debra Squyres Date: 10/24/2012 5:17:00 AM A dandy poem !! I so often have to pull out my dictionary as well...Enjoyed the read this morning...Blessings and welcome to the Soup....I can't beleive you actually read TWO of my poems ...actually read the whole things. So many don't...oh well, it is what it is...and I thank your for your time spent on my poems and your comments... Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 11/18/2012 9:28:00 AM OOps! High time I correct my spell, thank you Debra! Dictionary xith one "n"...Such a usual word, what a shame! Hope you are fine, I'm coming for new poems:) Love, Hanitra

James Tate Date: 10/23/2012 2:54:00 PM I love your sense of humor. Keep up the good work. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/23/2012 11:07:00 AM V R-A., awee..this is a good little win,, i like the slamming bomb you send her back...i also like the line and image of you pulling out a dictionary when you read her poems... always...pd Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 11/18/2012 9:31:00 AM Dictionary with one "n"...O my! Thank you for your kind words, PD! Congratulations on all your wins and good luck for all the new contests! Love, Hanitra

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/23/2012 3:14:00 AM A very lovely winning tribute for a fine lady Hanitra. Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/16/2012 12:40:00 PM CONGRATS ON A STUNNING WRITE AND WIN LUV .. VIENNA IS A POPULAR POETESS AND A DEAR FRIEND TO ME .. SO HAPPY TO HAVE MET U TOO .. Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 11/18/2012 9:33:00 AM I hope you are fine, Linda. Thank you for your kind words! Have a nice new week! Love, Hanitra

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/5/2012 6:26:00 AM Congratulations on your placement in Harry/Mandy's contest Voahanitriniaina. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 10/5/2012 1:06:00 AM Belated Congratulations life overtook me for a while xx Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/4/2012 1:55:00 PM Congrad's on your win! Light & Love Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/5/2012 11:10:00 AM Thank you so much, Debbie. I'll try to learn from you to do better:) Love, Hanitra

Joann Grisetti Date: 10/4/2012 8:46:00 AM Congratulations on your winning poem. Love Vie, and she deserves your tribute. Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/4/2012 10:16:00 AM Thank you so much, Joann! And congratulations for your so concrete balloon poem...:) I loved the idea and the shape was clear cut and neat, it almost jumped into my face just after the click, hahaha! As a newcomer, I don't much know Vie but I right away liked how she proposed that startling subject for a contest. My very first contest on the Soup, in fact ...:) Bye, Hanitra

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/3/2012 3:10:00 PM how fun this is. Was it for h er contest?? Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/5/2012 11:21:00 AM Hello, Andrea! In fact, it was for the Mandy/Harry contest about Cats and Curiosity. I wrote just after participating in Vie's Petunia contest that I found really startling and very interesting. I was so impressed...and had a lot of fun writing for the two contests. Thank you very much for showing interest! Love, Hanitra

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 9/30/2012 1:09:00 PM brilliant Hanitra hope I have it right this time, and Vie I am sure will love this xx Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/1/2012 2:25:00 AM Thank you, Golden Girl! Love, Hanitra

Robert Pettit Date: 9/30/2012 1:01:00 PM Considering the fact that English is not your primary language, I would say you have written this entry quite well. Login to Reply Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/1/2012 2:30:00 AM Thank you, Robert! I'll go on reading your work to learn some new...tricks (I mean, from the magician!) Hahaha!:) Hanitra

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/30/2012 10:20:00 AM A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol Login to Reply