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Vienna Bombardier

There is a lady In my Soups, She writes poetry As she stoops To think about philosophy Or talk about life's mystery. And everytime I read her songs, I must use the dictionnary To understand the rights and wrongs Of her deep dip-in poetry: I sent her back A bomb attack !

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Harry Horsman

Date: 1/6/2013 8:38:00 PM

just browsing an oldie of yours,, not disappointed....

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 1/13/2013 3:53:00 AM

So kind of you, Harry! Have a nice day! Blessings, Hanitra

Joseph May

Date: 11/14/2012 4:05:00 PM

She is a nice lady and a prolific writer......thanks for stopping by with your kind words Hanitra

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 11/14/2012 5:19:00 PM

...And coming back soon to read your poems, Joseph! It was a pleasure! Blessings, Hanitra

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 10/28/2012 5:51:00 PM

Funny and well-written.

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 11/14/2012 5:21:00 PM

Thank you so much, Vesna!

Robert Johnson

Date: 10/24/2012 10:00:00 AM

I shall call you Voahan. If that's alright. :) Oops, I see you go by Hanitra. So be it. :) I love the way you interplay with what you say on my poems. I appreciate that. You have a talent for the rhyme and rythem yourself I see. Vienna can't help but be pleased.

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 11/18/2012 9:23:00 AM

Have been reading you again today, Robert! Such a pleasure! Just before getting back to work...:) Have a good week yourself!Blessings, Hanitra

Debra Squyres

Date: 10/24/2012 5:17:00 AM

A dandy poem !! I so often have to pull out my dictionary as well...Enjoyed the read this morning...Blessings and welcome to the Soup....I can't beleive you actually read TWO of my poems ...actually read the whole things. So many don't...oh well, it is what it is...and I thank your for your time spent on my poems and your comments...

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 11/18/2012 9:28:00 AM

OOps! High time I correct my spell, thank you Debra! Dictionary xith one "n"...Such a usual word, what a shame! Hope you are fine, I'm coming for new poems:) Love, Hanitra

James Tate

Date: 10/23/2012 2:54:00 PM

I love your sense of humor. Keep up the good work.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/23/2012 11:07:00 AM

V R-A., awee..this is a good little win,, i like the slamming bomb you send her back...i also like the line and image of you pulling out a dictionary when you read her poems... always...pd

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 11/18/2012 9:31:00 AM

Dictionary with one "n"...O my! Thank you for your kind words, PD! Congratulations on all your wins and good luck for all the new contests! Love, Hanitra

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/23/2012 3:14:00 AM

A very lovely winning tribute for a fine lady Hanitra. Congratulations on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/16/2012 12:40:00 PM

CONGRATS ON A STUNNING WRITE AND WIN LUV .. VIENNA IS A POPULAR POETESS AND A DEAR FRIEND TO ME .. SO HAPPY TO HAVE MET U TOO ..

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 11/18/2012 9:33:00 AM

I hope you are fine, Linda. Thank you for your kind words! Have a nice new week! Love, Hanitra

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/5/2012 6:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Harry/Mandy's contest Voahanitriniaina. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/5/2012 1:06:00 AM

Belated Congratulations life overtook me for a while xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/4/2012 1:55:00 PM

Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/5/2012 11:10:00 AM

Thank you so much, Debbie. I'll try to learn from you to do better:) Love, Hanitra

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/4/2012 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem. Love Vie, and she deserves your tribute.

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/4/2012 10:16:00 AM

Thank you so much, Joann! And congratulations for your so concrete balloon poem...:) I loved the idea and the shape was clear cut and neat, it almost jumped into my face just after the click, hahaha! As a newcomer, I don't much know Vie but I right away liked how she proposed that startling subject for a contest. My very first contest on the Soup, in fact ...:) Bye, Hanitra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2012 3:10:00 PM

how fun this is. Was it for h er contest??

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/5/2012 11:21:00 AM

Hello, Andrea! In fact, it was for the Mandy/Harry contest about Cats and Curiosity. I wrote just after participating in Vie's Petunia contest that I found really startling and very interesting. I was so impressed...and had a lot of fun writing for the two contests. Thank you very much for showing interest! Love, Hanitra

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/30/2012 1:09:00 PM

brilliant Hanitra hope I have it right this time, and Vie I am sure will love this xx

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/1/2012 2:25:00 AM

Thank you, Golden Girl! Love, Hanitra

Robert Pettit

Date: 9/30/2012 1:01:00 PM

Considering the fact that English is not your primary language, I would say you have written this entry quite well.

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/1/2012 2:30:00 AM

Thank you, Robert! I'll go on reading your work to learn some new...tricks (I mean, from the magician!) Hahaha!:) Hanitra

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2012 10:20:00 AM

A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol