Vienna Bombardier

There is a lady
In my Soups,
She writes poetry
As she stoops
To think about philosophy
Or talk about life's mystery.
And everytime I read her songs,
I must use the dictionnary
To understand the rights and wrongs
Of her deep dip-in poetry:

I sent her back
A bomb attack !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horsman Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 8:38 PM
just browsing an oldie of yours,, not disappointed....
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 3:53 AM
So kind of you, Harry! Have a nice day! Blessings, Hanitra
May Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 4:05 PM
She is a nice lady and a prolific writer......thanks for stopping by with your kind words Hanitra
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 5:19 PM
...And coming back soon to read your poems, Joseph! It was a pleasure! Blessings, Hanitra
Kovrlija Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 5:51 PM
Funny and well-written.
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 5:21 PM
Thank you so much, Vesna!
Johnson Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 10:00 AM
I shall call you Voahan. If that's alright. :) Oops, I see you go by Hanitra. So be it. :) I love the way you interplay with what you say on my poems. I appreciate that. You have a talent for the rhyme and rythem yourself I see. Vienna can't help but be pleased.
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 9:23 AM
Have been reading you again today, Robert! Such a pleasure! Just before getting back to work...:) Have a good week yourself!Blessings, Hanitra
Squyres Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 5:17 AM
A dandy poem !! I so often have to pull out my dictionary as well...Enjoyed the read this morning...Blessings and welcome to the Soup....I can't beleive you actually read TWO of my poems ...actually read the whole things. So many don't...oh well, it is what it is...and I thank your for your time spent on my poems and your comments...
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 9:28 AM
OOps! High time I correct my spell, thank you Debra! Dictionary xith one "n"...Such a usual word, what a shame! Hope you are fine, I'm coming for new poems:) Love, Hanitra
Tate Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 2:54 PM
I love your sense of humor. Keep up the good work.
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October 23, 2012 at 11:07 AM
V R-A., awee..this is a good little win,, i like the slamming bomb you send her back...i also like the line and image of you pulling out a dictionary when you read her poems... always...pd
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 9:31 AM
Dictionary with one "n"...O my! Thank you for your kind words, PD! Congratulations on all your wins and good luck for all the new contests! Love, Hanitra
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 3:14 AM
A very lovely winning tribute for a fine lady Hanitra. Congratulations on your win!
Sweetheart Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 12:40 PM
CONGRATS ON A STUNNING WRITE AND WIN LUV .. VIENNA IS A POPULAR POETESS AND A DEAR FRIEND TO ME .. SO HAPPY TO HAVE MET U TOO ..
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 9:33 AM
I hope you are fine, Linda. Thank you for your kind words! Have a nice new week! Love, Hanitra
Brown Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 6:26 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Harry/Mandy's contest Voahanitriniaina. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 1:06 AM
Belated Congratulations life overtook me for a while xx
Guzzi Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 1:55 PM
Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 11:10 AM
Thank you so much, Debbie. I'll try to learn from you to do better:) Love, Hanitra
Grisetti Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem. Love Vie, and she deserves your tribute.
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 10:16 AM
Thank you so much, Joann! And congratulations for your so concrete balloon poem...:) I loved the idea and the shape was clear cut and neat, it almost jumped into my face just after the click, hahaha! As a newcomer, I don't much know Vie but I right away liked how she proposed that startling subject for a contest. My very first contest on the Soup, in fact ...:) Bye, Hanitra
Dietrich Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 3:10 PM
how fun this is. Was it for h er contest??
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 11:21 AM
Hello, Andrea! In fact, it was for the Mandy/Harry contest about Cats and Curiosity. I wrote just after participating in Vie's Petunia contest that I found really startling and very interesting. I was so impressed...and had a lot of fun writing for the two contests. Thank you very much for showing interest! Love, Hanitra
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 1:09 PM
brilliant Hanitra hope I have it right this time, and Vie I am sure will love this xx
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 2:25 AM
Thank you, Golden Girl! Love, Hanitra
Pettit Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 1:01 PM
Considering the fact that English is not your primary language, I would say you have written this entry quite well.
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 2:30 AM
Thank you, Robert! I'll go on reading your work to learn some new...tricks (I mean, from the magician!) Hahaha!:) Hanitra
Brown Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 10:20 AM
A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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