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Vesuvious

Vesuvious thoughts of love flow, tween toe n toe, and in a subtle shift, lovers come to together, passion's flow, interrupted by a tiff, but eyes lock again, no further pain, love resumes, perhaps a little stiff, again... Interesting babe, how words incite, the feelings, heat n steam ignite, bring you to the peak, not quite, oh no it's mount Vesuvious..... Don Johnson 7-aug-11

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Date: 8/7/2011 10:34:00 AM
Awesome Poetry. Thanks for sharing!!
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Date: 8/7/2011 6:56:00 AM
Intriguingly suggestive and fun write! Passions can ebb and flow (and explode!) like a volcano! Good write. Robert.
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Date: 8/7/2011 4:51:00 AM
excellent write, love it, hot stuff
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