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Vermillion Sundown

To the onslaught of night, daylight is retreating. In the western horizon, the sun is receding. Stratus clouds display a reddish hue. A gloaming precedes the dark, which is due. In the foreground, I see silhouettes of trees. They bend, but never break in the breeze. It is a rare and beautiful sight. I see vermillion clouds before night. They seem to signal the coming of the moon. A silver waxing crescent makes its presence soon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/2/2012 10:03:00 PM
ROBERT..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 1/10/2012 6:06:00 AM
Congrats on the win, nice visuals, nice rhymes intersting scene, very good.
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Date: 1/7/2012 7:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win; a magical weave of poetic images. Would you be mad if I point out 'vermilion' is spelled with one 'L'.
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Robert Pettit
Date: 1/7/2012 8:30:00 PM
No John, I would not resent that at all. I want people to point out my errors if I make them. I found out that both spellings of the word are acceptable.
Date: 1/6/2012 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations Robert. Well done.
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Date: 1/6/2012 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations Robert on your outstanding write. Have a great day. Jon
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Date: 1/6/2012 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any 2011 Poem" contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/31/2011 7:33:00 PM
very nice and thanks I know it was difficult to read my apologies......sincerely,Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/31/2011 9:50:00 AM
This is a beautiful piece, you've captured a picture so well. Love your use of expression. Thanks for stopping by my 'I am numb' poem. Pink Floyd happens to be my favourite band, although the poem not based on that! Thanks a million. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 12/30/2011 10:30:00 PM
Beautiful Job!
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Date: 12/30/2011 10:27:00 PM
You have depicted a wonderful display of a sunset with your amazing words! The images that are fixed in my head come from your descriptions of sunsets most red! Night finally comes and dominates the sky, I know I often wonder why! Great Work Robert!!
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Robert Pettit
Date: 12/30/2011 10:39:00 PM
On a now-defunct poetry site, someone displayed a set of photographs from her area. I wrote this based on those photos.
Date: 12/30/2011 10:02:00 PM
Delightful depiction.
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