Vermillion Sundown

To the onslaught of night, daylight is retreating.
In the western horizon, the sun is receding.
Stratus clouds display a reddish hue.
A gloaming precedes the dark, which is due.
In the foreground, I see silhouettes of trees.
They bend, but never break in the breeze.
It is a rare and beautiful sight.
I see vermillion clouds before night.
They seem to signal the coming of the moon.
A silver waxing crescent makes its presence soon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A   Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 10:03 PM
ROBERT..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd
Bagnall Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 6:06 AM
Congrats on the win, nice visuals, nice rhymes intersting scene, very good.
Smith Avatar
January 7, 2012 at 7:57 PM
Congratulations on your fine win; a magical weave of poetic images. Would you be mad if I point out 'vermilion' is spelled with one 'L'.
Pettit Avatar
January 7, 2012 at 8:30 PM
No John, I would not resent that at all. I want people to point out my errors if I make them. I found out that both spellings of the word are acceptable.
Quigley Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 1:59 PM
Congratulations Robert. Well done.
Arno Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations Robert on your outstanding write. Have a great day. Jon
Brown Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 7:01 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any 2011 Poem" contest Robert. Love, Carol
Greenlee Avatar
December 31, 2011 at 7:33 PM
very nice and thanks I know it was difficult to read my apologies......sincerely,Happy New Year!
Mantle Avatar
December 31, 2011 at 9:50 AM
This is a beautiful piece, you've captured a picture so well. Love your use of expression. Thanks for stopping by my 'I am numb' poem. Pink Floyd happens to be my favourite band, although the poem not based on that! Thanks a million. Best wishes Em :)
Bunton Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 10:30 PM
Beautiful Job!
Sivey Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 10:27 PM
You have depicted a wonderful display of a sunset with your amazing words! The images that are fixed in my head come from your descriptions of sunsets most red! Night finally comes and dominates the sky, I know I often wonder why! Great Work Robert!!
Pettit Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 10:39 PM
On a now-defunct poetry site, someone displayed a set of photographs from her area. I wrote this based on those photos.
Smith Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 10:02 PM
Delightful depiction.
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