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Vermillion Autumn

For a long lost summer of fun we're particularly thankful While fall promises to be doggedly cruel and sorrowful Behind us lay shattered dreams of innocence and nights enchanted Reminding us days are numbered not to be taken for granted Each fall we see life's cycles perpetually regenerate And facing death is natural allowing to commemorate Now it's our turn to face music and orchestra as we come forth Nodding to the maestro and bravely hold our head high to the north Whilst the shock wears off and we concede to abide by nature's rules We bite with heart into the last vermillion autumn of our lives AP: 1st place 2020 Submitted on October 31, 2018 for CONTEST NO.512 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND and September 27, 2018 for contest VERMILION AUTUMN COUPLETS sponsored by VERMILLION SCYTHE

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 9/28/2018 1:14:00 PM

This poem really pulls you into it, making you think and reflect. Spring, the renewal, autumn, the end, death . The cycle of life, all life. See vivid color fade into black. Really enjoyed this Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/28/2018 2:53:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Sandra. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/28/2018 3:16:00 AM

This poem has me sighing deeply for the end of summer, well done, as usual, my friend. The ending is beautiful.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/28/2018 7:39:00 AM

Thank you so much, Caren.