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Verbless - Grief

MEMORIAL nothingness- the grief, such sorrow! then emptiness, weeping why ! then loneliness. ___________________________ December 29, 2019 Poetry/Verse/Verbless- Grief Copyright Protected, ID 19-1212-376-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for FFI Blog Series 49 Brian Strand Podium Place 1

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/4/2020 6:09:00 PM

It is precious, grief ... it is the lasting proof of the depth of our love ... the echo of life, the ripple in the surface of time that reminds us how sweet was that which passed through ... I'm lost in the dark without Dad, but I let the love there wrap me like a blanket, and I know he's with me. Beautiful write, my friend ... peace and comfort to you. <3

Constance La France
Date: 1/5/2020 11:30:00 AM

Greg, you understand this pain I feel, a pain that time cannot erase, I am still lost without my dad and my mom, like an orphan in the cruel world with no anchor to hold me from floating away, some say time heals, they are wrong . . . we learn to accept but the unconditional love is forever ~ (thanks for visiting)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/29/2019 1:25:00 PM

So true. I just lost my brother. Happy New Year 2020................

Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2019 1:49:00 PM

Paula, thanks for visiting, the price of loving is grieving, happy new year to you too !