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Venom

zealous jealous faceless baseless spite incites the zealous jealous breeds vomiting from faceless baseless creeds. 1/24/2018

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Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/12/2018 3:14:00 PM
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Once venom enters the blood, there is no turning back. It poisons the entire being. Or so it seems. Well said! ~ Maia
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 6/21/2018 6:09:00 PM
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True! Venom only hurts us if we allow it to get into us deeply (bloodstream). If we let it run right through us (digestive), it is harmless; hence the title :) thanks for sharing your insight. It is good to hear when the intended message is being received!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/15/2018 8:50:00 PM
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Congrats on a great Tyburn and deserved win, Lukas! :-)
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/3/2018 12:48:00 PM
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Back with congrats! :) xomo
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/1/2018 8:39:00 PM
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Lukas, congratulations on this great piece :)
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 2/2/2018 6:49:00 PM
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Thank you Eve :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/1/2018 8:04:00 PM
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Congrats on your win, Lukas. Powerful.
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 2/2/2018 6:50:00 PM
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Thank you :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/1/2018 7:52:00 PM
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Great message in yours, Lukas. Congrats for the win.
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 2/2/2018 6:48:00 PM
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Thank you Andrea, you are always so kind and never miss a chance to share the love. I don't know how you have the time :)
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Date: 2/1/2018 5:49:00 PM
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Your title says it all...congrats on well-chosen rhymers for your tyburn. An enjoyable read.
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 2/2/2018 6:46:00 PM
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Thank you :)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 2/1/2018 5:05:00 PM
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Congrats on your win with this sharp piece, Lungs, well done! Regards, Viv
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Paul Callus
Date: 2/1/2018 3:49:00 PM
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Sure enough, envy can be a poisoned chalice, Lukas. Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 2/2/2018 6:45:00 PM
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No doubt! Thanks Paul
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John Lawless
Date: 2/1/2018 2:31:00 PM
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Hmmm. nice twisted play on words and metaphor in this cynical write.
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 2/2/2018 6:10:00 PM
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Thank you :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2018 2:25:00 PM
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In quite the spitfire mood...lol! Congrats on 1st place, Lukas!
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 2/2/2018 6:09:00 PM
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lol... gotta switch it up every once in a while :) Thx Kim.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 1/24/2018 11:16:00 PM
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Oh good one! Packs a punch.
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 1/26/2018 7:57:00 PM
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Thank you! :)

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