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Velveteen Sunset

Spoiled scraps of wasted day
Deflate and soil the leveled West
Bruised and bitter they copulate
On an amethyst bed 
Too feverish in haste to note
Their plush hues have harshened

The hour came so suddenly
Now all at once must they drink
People's Temple refugees
Squared away and nervous 
In their new, nightly Jonestown

Their reverend is hiding
Bright as he is, he sweats
Half hidden under groping land
Mostly melted into reaching trees
Will he come again come morning
Only stars will be awake to see

Until then the night is black
And very lonely



Chelsea Westerfield
August 6th, 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/20/2013 9:20:00 PM
Chelsea, what a sweet win.congrats... love ~SKAT~ :)
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Date: 8/19/2013 5:15:00 PM
Hi Chelsea, a beautiful sunset poem ... congratulations!! xox..Linda
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Date: 8/18/2013 9:15:00 AM
One of the best, congratulations!
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Date: 8/18/2013 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend. Thank you so much for your very spectacular and outstanding poem. I love it so much and so enjoyed. Thank you so much as well for your full support. Have a blessed day! Big hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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