Velvet Verse

rumor spreads quickly
shy, doubtful deciphering~
fine silk poetry


Written: January 14, 2023

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William Kelii Kekaula

January 17, 2023 at 8:56 AM

A very nice haiku you've written here, Lasaad, the light touch of your illuminating exposé was exquisitely clever my friend, much enjoyed. Aloha William

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 14, 2023 at 11:47 AM

Hello Soto, Ilove this Hakiu. Enjoyyour day my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos

January 14, 2023 at 10:31 AM

Rumors quickly spread. When I very ill last September, the ambulance came as my husband was scared, we have a little gadget thanks to our one son who is an ophthalmic surgeon, this one counts your oxygen saturation and mine was way below normal, the paramedics had to give me oxygen before they took me to Hospital. Well the neighbors saw and it spread round the village like wildfire, my husband said when Jenny comes back, you can ask her all your questions. GREAT HAIKU MY FRIEND. Hugs Jennifer

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