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Velvet Silence - Hiku 33 -

Written: August 07, 2025, for Brian Strand Contest ***************** h e a c l n c e y l o i n s v e l v s e t d~u~s~k on b g u n r i n w ished— t*i*m*e f / o / r / g / e / t / s / to a c h e \|/ ***

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Date: 8/7/2025 11:55:00 PM
"Velvet dusk on burnished wings.... " Beautiful way of expressing. Wonderful haiku. All the best dear friend.
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Date: 8/7/2025 10:17:00 PM
A beautiful feeling this creates - mysterious, too :)
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Date: 8/7/2025 4:46:00 PM
halcyon silence! I love it and like what you did with this creation. Best wishes with the contest. Texas hugs, Sara
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Date: 8/7/2025 10:40:00 AM
What a creative/fun ~ write/shape. You are really good at this. "Good Luck" Have a lovely/fun day writing away...............
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