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Veils of Autumn Re-Visited - Contest

Writing different forms I find so hard to do Yet I wrote a poem using the form dodoitsu Wrote it with hope thought it was just fine Liked by others, yet wasn’t placed this time. I have re-read it since and in my mind it’s a star the Veils of Autumn playing on your senses afar It is there for all to read and enjoy that’s true Not making the list, doesn’t take away the view That this poem creates for all to see Proud of this poem, cos it was written by me.

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Date: 4/26/2015 4:59:00 PM
thank you for the reply..PD
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Date: 12/27/2014 1:38:00 PM
Brilliant Seren! A Fav!
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Date: 12/25/2014 10:42:00 AM
A good effort, Seren. :) john.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/26/2014 3:44:00 PM
thank you John ....Seren
Date: 12/25/2014 8:15:00 AM
I will have to take a look....Merry Christmas Seren to you and your family
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/26/2014 3:44:00 PM
Merry Xmas to you and yours Tim....Seren
Date: 12/24/2014 6:59:00 PM
Seren,, Stopping by to say Hello, and Wish you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/26/2014 3:43:00 PM
Hey PD lovely to see you again...Seren
Date: 12/24/2014 8:52:00 AM
I appreciate the way you have approached the theme of the contest, Merry Christmas, Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/24/2014 2:02:00 PM
Merry Xmas Ram, hope you have treasured memories to savour...Seren

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