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Veiled

~~~~~~ *_* ~~~~~~ Bag of true "MAGICS" Lifelong universal tricks Stone-blind...Ironic Jailed vision seems so comic NONE - defined " REALISTIC " . An emptied "TOP HAT" Rabbit shown without the rat Unknown with the plot You're blind - the whole trick...not seen Unlike PHILOSOPHERS - " KEEN " . ~~~~~~ *_* ~~~~~~ ================================================= *** T_T JUN-JUN VILLANUEVA *** T_T " BAG OF TRICKS " contest

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Kash Poet

Date: 7/25/2011 10:49:00 PM

Congrats JUN-JUN on your win in the contest of Linda.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/25/2011 4:13:00 PM

Clever piece, my friend. Many congrats on all your wins, Jun-jun: )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/25/2011 10:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Bag Of Tricks" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/25/2011 7:56:00 AM

jun-jun super congratulations on you win in Linda's contest :)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 7/24/2011 12:30:00 PM

Thanks, jun-jun, for your kind words of appreciation...SJ

David Williams

Date: 7/24/2011 4:24:00 AM

hey jun-jun, congrats on a great win, David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2011 8:36:00 PM

Good one..Congrats on your win..Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 7/23/2011 2:37:00 PM

I haven't been on Soup much in the last couple of days and have a ton of congrats messages to send - and not much time to send them in today! Forgive hasty message -many congrats on your wins : )

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/23/2011 2:10:00 PM

My congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Linda,jun-jun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2011 2:00:00 PM

Congrats jun-jun on your success in my contest and thankxx for your support luv... amazing words..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2011 12:20:00 PM

way to go in the contest, Jun jun. Congratulations for a second time today!

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 7/9/2011 10:22:00 AM

A wonderful Tanka Jun-Jun, best to you in the contest. Caryl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/8/2011 6:55:00 PM

Lovely take on the theme of the contest, jun-jun

Jl Sadberry

Date: 7/8/2011 5:03:00 PM

Smile, *^_^* “Some Truths Embed Themselves Like A Ruby Tattoo'd Upon Ones Everlasting Heart *^_^* My Dear Precious & Gifted JunJun = Makes Myself Consider What Christ Jesus Once Did Say *^_^* `If I Denied This Truth Then, I Would Be A Liar Like Many of You` == Although I Am Not Quite Certain As Unto Why This Wonderful Creative Verse Invoked Such A Reflection *^_^* Perhaps It Had Something to Do With The Topic of Magic *^_^* Loved It My Friend.” === My Love Always, Jasper *

Kash Poet

Date: 7/8/2011 12:53:00 PM

Enjoyed this creative write jun-jun.Best wishes.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/8/2011 12:15:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Jun-Jun. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 7/8/2011 10:33:00 AM

hey Jun-Jun thanks for your comments, good luck with this one, David