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Veiled

“Ignorance is the veil, we need to lift ~ If we be silent, soul’s ascent is swift” ~ quote by poet Time and again we find that we have failed to embrace that joy of which scriptures speak and so truth of existence remains veiled, since indulgence in desires makes us weak. Ceasing striving, if we simply be still, bereft of thought flow, identity dies and thus fully surrendered to God’s will, we feel within form, bliss magnetism rise. The shift then is from thinking to feeling, by choosing to align head with our heart, we unveil what ego was concealing, as bliss ignition within us does start. Oh hermit, know that God and soul are one ~ Save coming undone, nothing need be done 20-April-2023 ___________ Writing Challenge - 'V' Words Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 5/31/2023 10:03:00 AM
Such a wisdom through your words!!! Thank you so much for sharing it!
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Date: 5/31/2023 4:07:00 PM
So happy these words resonate in your heart, Smita
Date: 4/24/2023 5:19:00 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge. So powerful and I love your quote too, congratulations. !
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Date: 5/10/2023 8:59:00 PM
Thank you Constance, for the placement and for hosting :)
Date: 4/23/2023 7:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win in the Contest ...Unseeking. I like your poem It is so nice. Well done Friend.
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Date: 5/10/2023 8:59:00 PM
Thank you, Alfonso
Date: 4/23/2023 2:05:00 AM
- Thank you for many beautiful words, U.S. :) - Congratulations :) - hugs
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Date: 4/23/2023 3:27:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine ~ so happy these words resonate
Date: 4/23/2023 12:37:00 AM
"existence remains veiled" - This, indeed, is the true veil of ignorance. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/23/2023 3:27:00 PM
Thank you, Chris
Date: 4/22/2023 11:02:00 PM
Beautiful thoughts as ever. "The shift then is from thinking to feeling, by choosing to align head with our heart," Each line can be turned into a quote. Congratulations on your great win, Seeker friend.
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Date: 4/23/2023 12:01:00 AM
Thank you dear Valsa
Date: 4/22/2023 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/quote/ending. Yes, "God and soul are one." Have a blessed weekend......
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Date: 4/22/2023 2:59:00 PM
Thank you, dear Paula ~ have an enjoyable weekend too
Date: 4/22/2023 10:46:00 AM
Hi Seeker, You composed such a well-written and deep write with the chosen word. Congrats on your win. Have a great day and weekend;-) Alexis
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Date: 4/22/2023 2:58:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis. I observed that there are only three poems using the keyword ‘veiled’
Date: 4/22/2023 9:03:00 AM
You have the answers to my prayers US. If only one applies them. Beautiful poetry and a keepsake [Fav]
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Date: 4/22/2023 2:57:00 PM
Thank you dear Anaya
Date: 4/19/2023 7:17:00 PM
beautiful punchline, verses to be shared thanks
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Date: 4/19/2023 8:36:00 PM
Thank you, yann

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