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Very pretty roses Valentine's precious gift, Veiled an adoration, Visible devotion. Value poignant gesture Voice full of feelings, on Verge of passionate tears. May 6, 2021 For " Pleiades - V" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman 6 syllables in each line - checked by howmanysyllables.com

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/11/2021 11:53:00 PM

Vase wears many flowers. Congratulation!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2021 4:41:00 PM

love your chosen word! Congrats

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2021 12:07:00 PM

- Very pretty Valentine's gift, Mala :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/8/2021 3:56:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, thank you for your encouraging comments. Love ~ Mala

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/8/2021 8:03:00 AM

A lovely, romantic Pleiades, Mala! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/8/2021 3:56:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. appreciate.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/8/2021 3:55:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. appreciate.

Jcb Brul

Date: 5/7/2021 5:05:00 PM

Oh, so lovely! Your description of the image is simply superb! I love this!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/7/2021 5:16:00 PM

Thank you, Dear JCB. I read your "Volcano" - so wonderfully descriptive.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 5/7/2021 9:51:00 AM

This is so lovely on the Valentine's special gift dear Mala... Enjoyed reading... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/7/2021 10:16:00 AM

Thanks, Anitha. I enjoyed yours - brilliant! Appreciate your lovely comments. Hugs ~ Mala

Paul Callus

Date: 5/6/2021 12:14:00 PM

You have performed very well with the letter "V", Mala. You not only describe the vase, but also include other things associated with it. ~ Best regards // paul

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/6/2021 8:47:00 AM

Precious vocabulary, Mala--enjoyed the voice of your poem.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/6/2021 8:51:00 AM

Thanks, Vijay. Delighted to know you enjoyed. BW ~ Mala