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Vapours

What are years but days, inter-locked one by one, each the same but different and yet seen through an aging body,remain unique continuous as we change they ignore our passing flotsam upon a timeless sea inspired by M Moore poem title

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/11/2012 7:37:00 PM
nice one! i love the beginning, with the " days inter-locked." it's a very interesting way to look at time passing.
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Date: 3/11/2012 5:51:00 PM
I do hope everyone will realize what life truly is...this is wonderful <3
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Date: 3/11/2012 5:19:00 PM
Indeed they do, and the older we get, the more precious we realize each day is, and hopefully not take them for granted as we did as when we were young.
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