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09/08/24

Vanishing Point 

Third Place 

Premiere Contest by Di11y  Da11y 

                                                 

                                               Life
                                             begins :
                                           Babyhood
                                          rolls to childhood .   
                                      Vibrant youth appears :
                                       Dynamic and  Brilliant !
                                     Busy career with  conflicts !
                                  Amour in glamour or lost love.
                                Accessed success or endured failure.
                                 Lots of activities : shortage of time.

                                Passing to cool serene seniority.
                                 Abundant time : No activity.
                                Friends - Associates to bid bye.
                                Children to lead their own lives.
                                          Old guy turning misfit
                                            in present era.
                                            Vanishing Point
                                              sparks sudden.
                                                  Call of 
                                                  death.
                                                    
                                                  But
                                             this norm 
                                           not followed
                                        always by life.
                                      Vanishing Point can
                                     haply flash any time
                                   in infancy, in teen age
                            in youth , without showing mercy.
                           Life is like that, more or less, ruthless.
                          Vanishing Point is free to make full stop.
                
                       From birth life starts  to compose a sentence.
                          Some get scope to complete as per wish.
                                  Comma, colon, semi- colon 
                                     of adverse situation 
                                     puts temporary pause.
                                      Full Stop to vanish
                                           life instantly.
                                           Incomplete 
                                             sentence 
                                               shown.
                                        
                                             
                                     



                                  
                                 

                            
                                                               
               
                                          

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Date: 9/23/2024 7:40:00 AM
amazing how you chose punctuation marks effectively to describe your thoughts. congratulations on your win dear poet. Be blessed.
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Date: 9/22/2024 11:59:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours. God bless you.
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