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09/08/24

Vanishing Point 

Third Place 

Premiere Contest by Di11y  Da11y 

Life begins : Babyhood rolls to childhood . Vibrant youth appears : Dynamic and Brilliant ! Busy career with conflicts ! Amour in glamour or lost love. Accessed success or endured failure. Lots of activities : shortage of time. Passing to cool serene seniority. Abundant time : No activity. Friends - Associates to bid bye. Children to lead their own lives. Old guy turning misfit in present era. Vanishing Point sparks sudden. Call of death. But this norm not followed always by life. Vanishing Point can haply flash any time in infancy, in teen age in youth , without showing mercy. Life is like that, more or less, ruthless. Vanishing Point is free to make full stop. From birth life starts to compose a sentence. Some get scope to complete as per wish. Comma, colon, semi- colon of adverse situation puts temporary pause. Full Stop to vanish life instantly. Incomplete sentence shown.

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Date: 9/23/2024 7:40:00 AM
amazing how you chose punctuation marks effectively to describe your thoughts. congratulations on your win dear poet. Be blessed.
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Date: 9/22/2024 11:59:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours. God bless you.
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