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Poetic Form: Lento

Inspired: 2020 January 28

 

*1st Place*
Writing Prompt - Let's Write a Lento
Contest Judged: 2020 February 05
Sponsored by: Dear Heart

 

Image: Loving Vincent by Theofy

Decades of a formula that only he knew about it and drew, Cascades of his artwork came to a head in his last years, Glissades of a swan in a lake that only a handful had seen, Tirades made its mark on him, distant from fellow peers.
~~[Van Gogh]~~
Impressed of his art garnered some interest in his style, Oppressed, a constant companion only he can befriend, Obsessed by what he drew insanely violent he withdrew, Distressed he found salvation in asylums to not descend.
~~[Wheatfield With Crows]~~
Crows, black gawking, feed in a meadow ache for harvest, Know that art needs to be made, scheme food for thought, Those sinister birds, a murder of crows festering the grain, Throes a fit mocking 'em, flys, pained him more than aught.
~~[Starry Night]~~
Bleak sky of blues, stars gave rise to a miracle been made, Streak of a sprawl unfurls his heavens tethered madness, Speak not lest he loses his concentration, maintains focus, Meek town his groundwork, lofty jewel amidst the sadness.
~~[Bedroom At Arles]~~
Red, that laid on a bed, table, chairs, paintings on the wall, Said was where he severed his ear, water bowl mirror hung, Head bandaged where he bled, he does a self-portrait of it, Deadman walking, Gauguin part ways, no song to be sung.
~~[Self-Portrait Bandage Ear And Pipe]~~
Drew closer, when they were both young, be such friends, Few friends Van Gogh had, Gauguin was at that moment, Grew apart after Vince shaving Paul, Vince wanted to hurt, Knew time together was getting just a bit grave and potent.
~~[House At Auvers]~~
Return to Arles made Van Gogh happy for good times there, Upturn spirits was a rarity, too few and far in the middle, Discern with him was questionable because he's unstable, Concern for his good, art kept him busy, else is second fiddle.
~~[Doctor Gachet]~~
Fields back of the house, a pistol, he plans to shoot himself, Wields his pistol, shoots, nobody hears, years gun lays hidden, Yields his brother Theo to his side as doctor aides him little, Shields truth futile, his art was world-renown, dies bedridden.

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Date: 2/6/2021 7:59:00 PM
So glad to find this awesome tribute published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~ clever form, William
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/7/2021 12:29:00 PM
Thank you, Line, for your kind expression my friend, Aloha!
Date: 2/10/2020 1:45:00 PM
William, congratulations on your win in my Lento writing prompt challenge with this wonderful write, I love your images and it is easy to see you worked on this poem to make it perfect _Constance
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Date: 2/10/2020 2:30:00 PM
I am so appreciative for the opportunity, your support, and continued sponsoring contests for all concerned -- Aloha!~@wk
Date: 2/8/2020 5:51:00 PM
You put a lot of effort here. Great job and congrats. I am teaching van Gogh at my school just now. For one little class. Amazing. I think he sold only one piece in his lifetime
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Date: 2/8/2020 7:06:00 PM
Methinks I did a disservice to his name, as my efforts brought a few kind words, such be yours of interest, Andrea, Aloha~@wk
Date: 2/6/2020 5:29:00 PM
I learned So much about the artist from your wonderful words William! Many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/6/2020 6:00:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, for your kind thoughts that you have shared, Aloha!~@wk
Date: 2/6/2020 1:42:00 PM
I'm very impressed by this long string of informative Lento forms, William! Congratulations on such a high-flying win. Regards // paul
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Date: 2/6/2020 2:51:00 PM
Ah, Paul, thank you for your acknowledgment of kindness, Aloha!~@wk
Date: 2/6/2020 1:18:00 PM
William, I so enjoyed reading this biography in poetry (bioetry? poegraphy?) of one of the world's favorite painters. I love how you highlighted 5 of his paintings to focus the lens on his tragic descent. Favorite line: "Meek town his groundwork, lofty jewel amidst the sadness". Bravo - a fav for me ~ John
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Date: 2/6/2020 2:49:00 PM
Wow, John, my extended courtesies and a world of thanks, you honor me sir, Aloha!~@wk
Date: 2/5/2020 3:13:00 PM
This is very well thought out. It was nice to learn some background behind the famous artist.
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Date: 2/5/2020 5:21:00 PM
I am glad that it had sparked some interest Juliet, Aloha!~@wk
Date: 1/28/2020 6:43:00 PM
William and again another win! Congrats my friend!;)
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Date: 1/28/2020 10:02:00 PM
Thank you, Brenda, my diligent poetess -- Aloha!~@wk

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