Vampire Quest

I chased a mosquito back to his nest
Determined to capture or kill the rest
My feet got stuck in the mud
They drained me of all my blood
Those blood sucking bugs I truly detest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 13, 2010 at 6:13 PM
LOVED THIS POEM:) *SKAT
Sweetheart Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 6:17 PM
Congrats Larry on your big win in the Limerick contest with this really great one.. enjoy another victory my friend..with luv..
Roberts Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 10:34 AM
cute, congrats on your win
Mehta Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 3:52 AM
Congrats on your win, Larry
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 10:10 PM
congratulations on your great win! LUv, Andrea
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 12:34 PM
The Belt has done it again. Nice one Larry. Congratz
Johnson Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 11:55 AM
Lucky ;you to live through that . Great limerick. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 11:29 AM
Good job with this gem Larry. Congratulations. Agape, Moses
Fraser Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 10:09 AM
Many congratulations Larry on your win in Carolyn & John's fine contest with this Limerick gem >> James
Taylor Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 8:35 AM
Congrats, Larry. Great write. Ralph
Brown Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 8:35 AM
Congratulations Larry on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Are You Bugged". Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 8:33 AM
A little dark humor to give us smiles! Congratulations on taking second place. Love, Carolyn
Taylor Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 1:31 PM
Outstanding, my friend. Great write. Good luck. Ralph
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