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Valley of the unforgiven

Steel in my veins, ash in the sky, I walk through fire and don’t ask why. The gods went silent, cold and blind, So I carve my fate in a world unkind. Whispers claw through twisted trees, Luring souls down to their knees. But I don’t bow, I don’t repent— Let the cursed wind shred my intent. Blood on stone, echoes scream, Shadows feed on broken dreams. Still I rise, sword in hand, One lone soul against this land. Darkness speaks, it knows my name, But I’ve long outgrown its flame. No angels cry, no heavens call— Only echoes—and I face them all. So light the pyre, let demons see— In the valley of death, I walk free.

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