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Valley of the Charred

In these vertical eyed times you've got to move like a cat atop a shelf of tiffany glass can't release your hobbled mind stay within thinning, spinning lines stay so very silent or be chastised. Choking on two-legged fat cats politically correct fat rats truth be damned truth be damned sooner or later something will give way man will shiver in dogged summer days. After the blast and mushroom fire surely we'll dwell in sewer pipe time with eyeless things and broken glass rind foraging for yesterdays' brightness in the valley of charred souls and time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/3/2018 11:30:00 AM
The poem touched me. last four lines are too appealing. Best Wishes.
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Date: 3/26/2018 2:47:00 AM
Well-said ... if only I COULD stay quiet - I get myself into too much trouble talking about love and kindness and truth, not what folks want to hear - their hatred is far too precious to them. Great write - blessings, friend.
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Date: 3/16/2018 12:20:00 AM
This poem packs a wallop; your imagery is completely appealing!
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Date: 3/12/2018 2:38:00 PM
anthony, incredible presentation of societal reality... i like the gritty feel of your poem.. huggs
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